Original song: Force 10 From Nantgarw

[Thekesslerboy]

Latest work in progress. Guitar effects through a Boss BR-800. Bass and strings converted from guitar through a GR55.

https://homerecording.com/bbs/threads/new-song-force-10-from-nantgarw.430240/

[Nick Ryder]

Hi, @Thekesslerboy

I quite like this but it feels like it could do with some polishing. The rhythm section probably needs some tweaking which in turn could affect the guitar and bass phrasing but that said, you have the ingredients for a great song here.

[Vicki]

I like your production. I don't know if it's my computer or something else, but the instrumentation was quite a bit louder than the vocals, and I couldn't make out most of the words. I could hear the melody, though, and I liked it. I heard "tidal wave" and "in the sky" and "in your eyes". It is hypnotic, in a way. Suitable for going dancing at a club.

[Thekesslerboy]

Thanks for the suggestions.  Remix with boosted bass, re-recorded solo, etc in the original post on Home Recording page.  Nearly there!