In July

[DarkoGiac]

Hey all,

Just stopping by for some feedback, of any kind . Wondering more about how the vocals sound more than anything. This is just a rough mix, but it's close-ish, maybe.

https://soundcloud.com/darko-g-929800060/in-july

[Vicki]

I think the vocals sound okay. As far as the mix, that's not my area, but I would like to hear some build as it goes, backing off again toward the end. Right now, it's pretty level, the same mix throughout.

The piece has a nice, laid-back feel to it. Brings to mind a moderately noisy club or bar, people at tables talking and listening.

Vicki

[icystorm]

@DarkoGiac -- I just realized I neglected to listen to your new song and comment on it. You listened to and commented on a song from me before and I always do my best to return that courtesy. That's really the only way a 'give and take' songwriters forum like this one functions.

Regarding your song, I just listened to In July. It has a cool, mid-tempo beat. The lead guitar, bass, synth, and percussion are arranged well in the song. You mentioned that it's a 'rough mix', but it think it has the makings of a good song once you develop it more. But, so far it's sounding good. Nice work so far! I look forward to hearing the track again if you decide to develop it more. Keep us posted!

Cheers,
Joseph

[mayaclars]

@DarkoGiac

Original vocal sound, charming night melody. Good combination of vocals with guitar melodies, interesting work with backing vocals towards the end of the melody. I liked it.

Maya