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SuperSmash

Hello!
I'm a new member, and am very excited to be here. Thank you for taking your time and reading my lyrics.
I recently wrote this song and would like your opinion on it. You would also help me a lot, if you could tell me in your words - what is this song about?

Title: Social Butterfly

[Verse 1]
Hi! My name is
Yes, I like this
Yes, I can do that
This was a good chat

If only it were this easy
To say it just so breezy
Mingle, dance and laugh
Not just stand like a photograph

I see them having fun
But I stand here as one
And then I recall
One - the loneliest number of all

[Chorus 1]
Fly, fly
Be a social butterfly

Soar, soar
As if no one is keeping score

Just don't forget
There is a whole world
You haven't met

[Verse 2]
This meeting has weight
It can decide my fate
I have to show my face
Without losing grace

It's so hot in here
The sweat is visible, I fear
Another minus point
To impress this joint

[Bridge]
No, no, no
My courage should know
That I am worthy
Even well past thirty

[Chorus 2]
Fly, fly
Today, you can try

Soar, soar
They need to see you more

Just don't forget
There is a whole world
Filled with regret

[Verse 3]
Still the thoughts mill
An already known drill
The pressure is rising
My self-esteem compromising

I gave it my best
To fit with the rest
Seduced by social temptation
I came to the realisation

Maybe socialising is not for me
On my couch I'm truly free
Maybe it's better to be oneself
Than an ornament on a shelf

[Chorus 3]
Fly, fly
Later you can cry

Soar, soar
On your bathroom floor

Just don't forget
There is a whole world
That got upset