Up for it 2

[jazz101]

Hi Guys,

This is my foray into electronic music, would be interested on your feedback, thanks,

George

[Vicki]

I don't really have any feedback--this type of music is outside my area of expertise. I *can* say I would love to be able to put together something like that. It had a great foot-tapping beat. Reminded me of scenes I've seen in TV shows and movies of people moving through a crowded club with people dancing.

[jazz101]

Hi Vicki,

Thanks for your feedback, it all counts and gives me an idea of what works and what doesn't,

George

[Mora Amaro La Loba]

Your attempt on EDM is very good, nice beats and cool ambients, I like a lot the bassss!!!!

[jazz101]

Hi Mora

Thanks for that, I just wanted to try something different,

George

[subvibe]

Hi

Not really my Genre But its well recorded & a good solid beat
i think it would go down well in Clubs

subvibe

[Boydie]

It is great to hear you trying something a bit different @jazz101

My feedback would be...

You have made some great sound and beat choices

I am not personally a fan of "fade ins" in any genre

I think the whole thing sounds a bit "soft" for modern EDM - I would find a way to "rough some bits up" - e.g. a filthy/dirty bass or a distorted lead synth sound

At the moment the sections feel very different and the transitions are a bit "stark"

I would suggest 2 things...

Find some nice "build and crash" sound effects to go across the transitions between section

It would also help to keep a "constant" throughout the whole track that the listener can use as an "anchor" - this would usually be a vocal, but in an instrumental, I would suggest finding a single "lead synth" type sound and use this as a constant - and then revolve all of the other sounds etc. around this

For a first foray though...great job!

[jazz101]

Hi Boydie,

great comments which I will take on board the next time I give it a try, your feedback is appreciated,

George

[ChrisPrice]

Not really my genre, but this sounds the business to my old ears. I was half expecting a vocal to come in.  If it's your first foray into this style then you've done a great job. I can't really add anything else as I don't know enough about this kind of music, but well done.

[jazz101]

Thanks Chris,

Your feed back is always appreciated,
George