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Title: Suddenly
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 02, 2025, 05:03 PM
Hola a todos, this new song was born from a mirror... Time and its arts...

Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: jazz101 on Feb 02, 2025, 06:07 PM
Hi Mora,

another great song, your music encourages us to listen and get a better understanding of the piece, well done,

George
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: icystorm on Feb 02, 2025, 08:48 PM
@Mora Amaro La Loba -- Another nice one! Your song defies labeling within any specific genre, because your style is unique. Maybe I could imagine Björk, Kate Bush, or Natalie Merchant producing a cool track like this. The blend of synth-keys, synth-percussion, and other synth-effects works well. Your vocals are great as always, and the mix is crystal clear and radio-ready!

Your lyrics are thought-provoking, and these lines were among the best:

I always want to be
I always want to be
I always want to be
The moon on the sea where I fish for my dreams
Before becoming a dead leaf
In the void where the graves sleep


Your video is an interesting kaleidoscope of images, colors, and scenes. I like your "strange dance" as you called it in your lyrics. Excellent!

Another enjoyable song and video, Mora. I enjoyed both. Thank you for sharing your creativity and talents! Stay well! :D

Cheers,
Joseph
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: ChrisPrice on Feb 02, 2025, 10:39 PM
Great song and video Mora. That's what I've come to expect from you and Marcus and this is no exception.No crits from me. Great stuff :)
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 03, 2025, 10:33 AM
Hola @ChrisPrice
Thank you so much, here we are, commenting on our works, new and old members of this forum, listening with interest what we do and dream. I hope the forum will be revitalized little by little!!!
Have a nice day
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: Vicki on Feb 04, 2025, 03:20 AM
"Observe the wrinkles that time has hung on my face." Great line! Oh, and "where I fish for dreams". You are so good with words.
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 04, 2025, 08:48 PM
Quote from: jazz101 on Feb 02, 2025, 06:07 PMHi Mora,

another great song, your music encourages us to listen and get a better understanding of the piece, well done,

George

Hola George, sorry for not answering before, I am the same clue-less as always!
Thank you for your nice comment @jazz101
Take care
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: Rightly on Feb 06, 2025, 01:56 PM
hi Mora
Excellent production on this one
Vocals are very well blended together too

This sounds quite surreal to me, and has an unusual style
I like that a lot

I don't understand the subtleties of the language you sing in
but you sound gentle and strong.

Lovely to hear you again!
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: IronKnee on Feb 06, 2025, 06:19 PM
As always, M....very avant-garde. I just love you mixes and productions. Awesome!
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 07, 2025, 10:24 AM
Quote from: icystorm on Feb 02, 2025, 08:48 PM@Mora Amaro La Loba -- Another nice one! Your song defies labeling within any specific genre, because your style is unique. Maybe I could imagine Björk, Kate Bush, or Natalie Merchant producing a cool track like this. The blend of synth-keys, synth-percussion, and other synth-effects works well. Your vocals are great as always, and the mix is crystal clear and radio-ready!

Your lyrics are thought-provoking, and these lines were among the best:

I always want to be
I always want to be
I always want to be
The moon on the sea where I fish for my dreams
Before becoming a dead leaf
In the void where the graves sleep


Your video is an interesting kaleidoscope of images, colors, and scenes. I like your "strange dance" as you called it in your lyrics. Excellent!

Another enjoyable song and video, Mora. I enjoyed both. Thank you for sharing your creativity and talents! Stay well! :D

Cheers,
Joseph


Hola Joseph, I appreciate a lot your comment, thank you so much, you give always details of the work that give sense to it. Take are! @icystorm
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: icystorm on Feb 07, 2025, 07:44 PM
@Mora Amaro La Loba -- You are always very welcomed. I look forward to your next song and video soon!

Cheers,
Joseph
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: Elvis Nash on Feb 08, 2025, 05:41 PM
What's up Mora ?
I think you might have created your own genre
Thats very unique
Great job producing this
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 08, 2025, 07:47 PM
Quote from: icystorm on Feb 07, 2025, 07:44 PM@Mora Amaro La Loba -- You are always very welcomed. I look forward to your next song and video soon!

Cheers,
Joseph

Lo mismo te digo gracias!!!
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 11, 2025, 06:27 PM
Quote from: Elvis Nash on Feb 08, 2025, 05:41 PMWhat's up Mora ?
I think you might have created your own genre
Thats very unique
Great job producing this

Hola @Elvis Nash
I am doing well,  new experiences... For health reasons I had to leave my house for a few days, go to another city, a huge challenge for me!!!
Thank you so much for your comment, I hope you are ok.
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: icystorm on Feb 11, 2025, 08:23 PM
Quote from: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 11, 2025, 06:27 PMFor health reasons I had to leave my house for a few days, go to another city, a huge challenge for me!!!

@Mora Amaro La Loba -- Wow! I sincerely hope you are better and in good health now! You always express supportive words and kind thoughts to others. In return, you have my best wises for good health! I look forward to your next song soon! ;D

Cheers,
Joseph
Title: Re: Suddenly
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 12, 2025, 05:49 PM
Oh! Thank you so much Joseph!!! You are really kind and I appreciate it. I am fine, much better than I was a while ago. I have been fighting this disease for many years, for now it is maintained after the last operation, I have already had 7, no more radiotherapy, everything is fine, Life is a good friend, it takes care of me and always offers me solutions, I am lucky.
@icystorm

Mora