Dreams are alive and then some have gone
And you, I will always have you
A child in your laughter and things you do
And a love of a spirit so true
As true as I am just an effigy
Of the man I wish you could know
The one who could give to you all your dreams
One at a time as we grow
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Worlds and wisdoms have gone before
But only one truth will remain
Love lies beyond scribes and troubadours
Love lies beyond its joy and its pain
And I know you and I will always be
The story that love wants to tell
In the songs of the minstrels and troubadours
Who delight in love's magic spell
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But wizards dwell only in minstrel songs
And your minstrel is taken by strife
All I can do is to be with you
All I can do is give you my life
And love you the way that I do
And hold you and try to abide
When love's silk and steel
Must choose a side
And I will always be the effigy
Of the man I wish you could know
Sounds like a man who thinks he's not understood...maybe?
I like the lines:
But wizards dwell only in minstrel songs
and
When love's silk and steel must choose a side
I'm wondering if this line:
All I can do is to be with you
would flow better if it was:
All I can do is be with you (taking out "to")
Do you have a melody for this?
Hello Vicki. Nice to make your acquaintance.
Yes, eliminating "to" works better.
I have a melody but my melody making has always been uninspiring. If I was to make a demo of this where would I post it on this site?
Edit: Vicki, the song is about a man who feels deep down that he isn't good enough for the one who loves him and he's constantly conflicted by it.