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Title: Tour Of Her Broken Heart
Post by: Elvis Nash on Feb 18, 2025, 12:17 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z2vQXNQhZO8


She walks us through halls of shame

Pictures of love like ghosts remain

Whispering walls of distant cries

Tears that fall from her weary eyes

V2

The floors creak from old regrets

Warm memories she can't forget

Candles flicker shadows dance

Empty rooms from lost romance

Ch

Take the tour of her broken heart

A cold museum torn apart

Buy a ticket earn your tears

Guide yourself thru all the fears

Step right up

If you can bare the shattered parts

Take the tour of her broken heart

V3

Doors slam the echos get loud

Thunder rolls from darkened clouds

Windows show the storm inside

Where her deepest sorrow hides

Ch

Bridge

She tries to escape from her house of cards

But gets dragged back in it's just to hard

Ch

Step right up

Step right up

If you can bare

If you can bare

The shattered parts

Take the tour of her broken heart
Title: Re: Tour Of Her Broken Heart
Post by: Vicki on Feb 19, 2025, 08:57 PM
You have a way with words! I love the metaphoric images in this.
Title: Re: Tour Of Her Broken Heart
Post by: Elvis Nash on Feb 19, 2025, 10:28 PM
Quote from: Vicki on Feb 19, 2025, 08:57 PMYou have a way with words! I love the metaphoric images in this.

Bit of a sad one , but the angle was so cool , I cut it. No hiding my voice with drums bass and screaming guitars , its bare naked with just a guitar 
Thanks Vicki
Title: Re: Tour Of Her Broken Heart
Post by: icystorm on Feb 21, 2025, 12:32 AM
@Elvis Nash -- It's a cool composition and recording, man! I enjoyed listening! Well done! :D

Cheers,
Joseph
Title: Re: Tour Of Her Broken Heart
Post by: jazz101 on Feb 21, 2025, 01:10 AM
Hi Elvis,

Well done, another finely crafted song.

George
Title: Re: Tour Of Her Broken Heart
Post by: Elvis Nash on Feb 21, 2025, 11:18 PM
Hey guys , thanks for listening