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Title: The Voice remixed
Post by: jazz101 on Feb 20, 2025, 10:23 PM
Hi all,

I remixed "The voice" my first song (I wrote it in May last year) I felt it needed something else, feedback as always appreciated,



George
Title: Re: The Voice remixed
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 21, 2025, 12:19 PM
Moved again listening to your song!! The morning became nostalgic wrapped by your song
really inspiring @jazz101
Title: Re: The Voice remixed
Post by: jazz101 on Feb 21, 2025, 12:58 PM
Thank you Mora,

I always value your opinion,

George
Title: Re: The Voice remixed
Post by: Boydie on Mar 31, 2025, 10:41 AM
Hi @jazz101

This is a gorgeous song, production, and performance!

Ticks ALL of my boxes - at about the 2min mark, I was thinking it just needs a little something extra....

...and then BOOM, the drums kicked in

The ONLY thing I can think to suggest, is perhaps a bigger, epic, build towards the end of the song would cap it all of nicely - but this is a really subjective choice

Absolutely stellar work here George!!
Title: Re: The Voice remixed
Post by: jazz101 on Apr 11, 2025, 01:40 PM
Thanks Boydie, your comments are always appreciated
Title: Re: The Voice remixed
Post by: ChrisPrice on Apr 16, 2025, 12:03 AM
When the piano kicked in I thought about John Lennon's 'Imagine'. An anthemic song for sure. I like the way this builds without ever going over the top. Great track :)
Title: Re: The Voice remixed
Post by: jazz101 on Apr 17, 2025, 02:54 PM
Thanks Chris