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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: subvibe on Feb 22, 2025, 04:54 PM

Title: Falling
Post by: subvibe on Feb 22, 2025, 04:54 PM

Hi
Here is a short song i have done It has a Pop Soul feel

subvibe-958077223 ยท falling

Falling by subvibe (https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/falling)

Thanks for taking the time to Listen

subvibe
Title: Re: Falling
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Feb 22, 2025, 06:52 PM
Hola!
I like it, I always like your songs, very current and always with a genial sound. I like the change of sound style that you introduce at 0'42 although it gave me the sensation of "stumbling" at 1'08 perhaps because of the guitar or the beat? The entrance also sounded "strange" to me, like a bite?

Sorry if it's not like that, you know, it's all about each one's appreciation and it's a good song @subvibe
Title: Re: Falling
Post by: Boydie on Mar 31, 2025, 10:50 AM
Another absolute cracker @subvibe

I am listening on a warm, sunny spring day in the UK, so it fits the vibe perfectly

I found the very start a little "abrupt", as if you had cut it a bit too close

The swirling pad sound was a little disorienting, but fortunately you used it sparingly so it didn't distract too much

It is very subjective (as @Mora Amaro La Loba liked the changes), but I personally prefer a song to maintain a distinctive feel all the way through, so felt the changes made the track feel a bit "bitty" to me

However, overall, another modern, commercial sounding, slice of brilliant pop - I loved it!