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Title: The Artist
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 04, 2025, 10:36 AM
Hola, I feel like this rom time to time thinking that if we exist all is possible... Music here is exotic?


Sometimes
I sit next to time
and make hm stop
even if it is only for a moment

moment
moment
that becomes an inmense space
where
yesterday
today
and toorrow
walk slowly


I can enter yesterday
to verify if the flowers
that I sowed
are still alive
'cause
my tomorrow needs their perfume
 to be alright

moment moment

Sometimes
I paint him hands
and give eyes of an artist that has to sculpt me


moment moment
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: IronKnee on Mar 04, 2025, 02:25 PM
Hi M....fabulous visual.
Wonderful, as always!
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: icystorm on Mar 04, 2025, 08:07 PM
@Mora Amaro La Loba — It's always great to visit the forum and see a new song and video from you. The Artist carries an eclectic, strange (in a good way), and wonderful vibe that is the hallmark of your unique compositions and productions. The synths, percussion, keys, and bass build nicely throughout your track. Your vocals are great, as usual, and are the highlight of your song. I can tell you spent a lot of time on the arrangement, mix, and production. Nicely done! The results are well worth it. 😀

Your lyrics effectively communicate your theme of time, clocks, moments, space, past, and future. I enjoyed how you sing of painting hands on time, as though time were a physical manifestation—a cool concept! My favorite lines are:

I can enter in yesterday
to verify if the flowers
that I sowed
are still alive
because
my tomorrow needs their perfume
to be alright


Very thought-provoking words!

Your video is awesome and visually conveys your song using interesting scenes, images, clocks, and motions. Well done! 😀

In summary, I love your new song and video; both are amazing as usual, Mora! I enjoyed listening and watching! I look forward to your next song and video soon. 😀

Kind regards,
Joseph
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: Vicki on Mar 06, 2025, 03:59 PM
Contemplative, existential, thoughtful. I really like this. What I might call a "mood piece".
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 07, 2025, 12:41 PM
Quote from: IronKnee on Mar 04, 2025, 02:25 PMHi M....fabulous visual.
Wonderful, as always!

Hola @IronKnee
gracias, much appreciated.
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 13, 2025, 09:07 PM
Quote from: icystorm on Mar 04, 2025, 08:07 PM@Mora Amaro La Loba — It's always great to visit the forum and see a new song and video from you. The Artist carries an eclectic, strange (in a good way), and wonderful vibe that is the hallmark of your unique compositions and productions. The synths, percussion, keys, and bass build nicely throughout your track. Your vocals are great, as usual, and are the highlight of your song. I can tell you spent a lot of time on the arrangement, mix, and production. Nicely done! The results are well worth it. 😀

Your lyrics effectively communicate your theme of time, clocks, moments, space, past, and future. I enjoyed how you sing of painting hands on time, as though time were a physical manifestation—a cool concept! My favorite lines are:

I can enter in yesterday
to verify if the flowers
that I sowed
are still alive
because
my tomorrow needs their perfume
to be alright


Very thought-provoking words!

Your video is awesome and visually conveys your song using interesting scenes, images, clocks, and motions. Well done! 😀

In summary, I love your new song and video; both are amazing as usual, Mora! I enjoyed listening and watching! I look forward to your next song and video soon. 😀

Kind regards,
Joseph


Hola Joseph,
So many kind words! Thank you so much  @icystorm
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: icystorm on Mar 13, 2025, 09:11 PM
@Mora Amaro La Loba -- You're very welcome! I look forward to your next release soon! :D

Kind regards,
Joseph
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: mayaclars on Mar 23, 2025, 10:04 AM
@Mora Amaro La Loba

A delight for my ears! :)
As always, great creative work and originality! And I liked this interesting work with vocals! Magical harmonies, beautiful video, fantastic vibe!  :)
You are my inspiration!

Maya
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 30, 2025, 04:47 PM
Quote from: IronKnee on Mar 04, 2025, 02:25 PMHi M....fabulous visual.
Wonderful, as always!
Gracias @IronKnee much appreciated
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 31, 2025, 07:16 PM
Quote from: icystorm on Mar 13, 2025, 09:11 PM@Mora Amaro La Loba -- You're very welcome! I look forward to your next release soon! :D

Kind regards,
Joseph

Thank you @icystorm
I like a lot the arrangement here, find it interesting and engaging as well as the voice.
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: subvibe on Apr 08, 2025, 11:40 AM

Hi

Love It
Great use of sounds & wonderful build up with suspense 
Top Stuff as usual from you

subvibe
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Apr 09, 2025, 02:07 PM
Quote from: mayaclars on Mar 23, 2025, 10:04 AM@Mora Amaro La Loba

A delight for my ears! :)
As always, great creative work and originality! And I liked this interesting work with vocals! Magical harmonies, beautiful video, fantastic vibe!  :)
You are my inspiration!

Maya

Hola Maya, bad moments for my family, so... I appreciate very much your so kind word!! That you!
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: icystorm on Apr 09, 2025, 03:49 PM
Quote from: Mora Amaro La Loba on Apr 09, 2025, 02:07 PMHola Maya, bad moments for my family, so... I appreciate very much your so kind word!! That you!

I hope things improve for you and your family soon, Mora. I'm looking forward to hearing new music from you when you're able to share it. 🙏

Wishing you and your family strength,
Joseph :D
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Apr 15, 2025, 07:33 PM
Quote from: icystorm on Apr 09, 2025, 03:49 PM
Quote from: Mora Amaro La Loba on Apr 09, 2025, 02:07 PMHola Maya, bad moments for my family, so... I appreciate very much your so kind word!! That you!

I hope things improve for you and your family soon, Mora. I'm looking forward to hearing new music from you when you're able to share it. 🙏

Wishing you and your family strength,
Joseph :D



Realizing that you're never prepared for anything adverse is truly crushing. Not knowing what to do, how to help, how to react is a turning point in anyone's life, a door to madness that shouldn't be crossed but that incites you to do so... Fighting against what's impossible is like waving your arms in the air while falling, aware that you're falling because no one knows fly beyond literature, poetry, or thought. @icystorm
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Apr 30, 2025, 03:53 PM
Quote from: subvibe on Apr 08, 2025, 11:40 AMHi

Love It
Great use of sounds & wonderful build up with suspense
Top Stuff as usual from you

subvibe


Thank you so much! @subvive
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: IronKnee on May 04, 2025, 03:27 AM
Hey there M....I love it. Very seductive and cerebral. 8)
Title: Re: The Artist
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on May 09, 2025, 07:33 PM
Quote from: IronKnee on May 04, 2025, 03:27 AMHey there M....I love it. Very seductive and cerebral. 8)

I am coming back little by little, thank you so much!!! But I don't think it's cerebral?
@IronKnee
Of course, this one is very me, I love the way the arrangement goes and the color of my voice here!! Not fx.