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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: mayaclars on Mar 15, 2025, 10:31 AM

Title: ANIMAL
Post by: mayaclars on Mar 15, 2025, 10:31 AM
Hey everyone! I finally released my new song "ANIMAL". I hope you like this one!


https://youtu.be/sw53cDFn_dc?si=wimF5UMJ6d9nzsPQ


LYRICS:

They are waiting for me to make
A bad break
Something that will disgrace
Perhaps ruin me
Do they truly believe
They're the only smart ass
Being hidden from view
Just to pursue me

Sooner or later they will get
Exhausted monitoring
Every step we're taking
Striking their fears

Freaky obsession
More like an animal
Funny you
This intelligence
Weirdly annoying
Yet so congenial
Loser you
(Loser you)

Freaky obsession
More like an animal
Funny you
This intelligence
Weirdly annoying
Yet so congenial
Loser you
(Loser you)
(Animal, animal)

You are a...
???Error???
You're the pity one
(Animal, animal)
(Animal, animal)
(Animal, animal)

Striding, looking for something
That we might trust
Wherever far away
Our feet can take us
Lasting misery lives in your history
But don't say you're the only one
Who suffers

Sooner or later they will get
Exhausted monitoring
Every step we're taking
Striking their fears

Freaky obsession
More like an animal
Funny you
This intelligence
Weirdly annoying   
Yet so congenial
Loser you
(Loser you)

Freaky obsession
More like an animal
Funny you
This intelligence
Weirdly annoying
Yet so congenial
Loser you
(Loser you)
(Animal, animal)

You are a...
???Error???
You're the pity one
(Animal, animal)
(Animal, animal)
(Animal, animal)

Title: Re: ANIMAL
Post by: Vicki on Mar 15, 2025, 08:15 PM
I enjoyed this--I have no particular feedback. I liked the video, too!
Title: Re: ANIMAL
Post by: Dan on Mar 26, 2025, 05:23 PM
Nice slice of synth. Kind of thing I aspire to do if only I could sing as well as you.
Title: Re: ANIMAL
Post by: subvibe on Mar 30, 2025, 02:06 PM
Hi

Nice arrangement with Catchy hook
great vocals & use of FX ..  Its modern but also has a retro feel

Well Done

subvibe
Title: Re: ANIMAL
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 30, 2025, 04:39 PM
Los this one my dear Maya, many colors and a rally catchy chorus. Lovely video too!!!
Bg kiss my little big artist.