Get It Out (https://homerecording.com/bbs/threads/new-song-get-it-out-accidental-ska-song.430374/)
Went a bit ska-like during the recording, totally unintentionally. Recorded with a Boss BR-800, Roland GR-55 for the guitar effects, bass and brass emulation, and a Roland ready strat. I have better lyrics for another verse, but it's long enough already.
It sounds well done to me. It's a bit long, as you mentioned, but I did stay interested to the end. If you have better lyrics, though, is there some way you could adjust the song to get them in? Shorten something earlier? Take out the instrumental breaks? Just ideas....
Vicki
@Thekesslerboy Good density of instrumental sound, good vocals.
For my taste, at some moments there are many instruments together at similar frequency, I'd love to enjoy the beauty of each of them. :)
Maya