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Title: You Took Me Down
Post by: idunno on Mar 16, 2025, 11:20 PM
The song can be recorded better but otherwise I consider it finished. Thanks for listening.

https://app.box.com/s/6suxm2f6irz1hc5tmcny1fmrvmqlqun0
Title: Re: You Took Me Down
Post by: snargleplax on Mar 17, 2025, 09:15 AM
That's lovely! Your voice has a nostalgic sound, like 1970s folk.
Title: Re: You Took Me Down
Post by: Vicki on Mar 17, 2025, 04:33 PM
I agree with @snargleplax ! Very lovely folky sound. Right up my alley. The gentle 1+1 sound suits it.
Vicki
Title: Re: You Took Me Down
Post by: mattyoungmusic on Mar 17, 2025, 05:17 PM
Fantastic guitar playing and singing.  A lovely song all around.
Title: Re: You Took Me Down
Post by: idunno on Mar 17, 2025, 10:45 PM
Quote from: snargleplax on Mar 17, 2025, 09:15 AMThat's lovely! Your voice has a nostalgic sound, like 1970s folk.

You have no idea how spot-on you are. I turned 70 yesterday. I've been writing since I learned to play the guitar in 1974. I stopped playing altogether between 1976 and 2005 (life and stuff) when the spirit left me. But, it came dancing back and I've been messing around with it since. So, yea, I'm a 70's throw-back.

Thanks to all for the listen and kind words.

Title: Re: You Took Me Down
Post by: mayaclars on Mar 21, 2025, 12:34 PM
@idunno

The guitar is recorded beautifully, with a pleasant lyrical melody and very emotional performance.
I listened to it with great pleasure!  :)

Maya