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Title: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: muso1070 on Apr 08, 2025, 05:34 PM
Hello all

I recently finished this new song called Runnin I wanted to share.
I will go about recording a studio version in the not to distant future but love to hear any thoughts or feedback when its in its rawest form just acoustic and vocal.
Definitely a songwriters song with catchy melody.
Cheers

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgmNupU2BJk
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: icystorm on Apr 08, 2025, 06:30 PM
Welcome to the forum, Chris. This is an excellent song and live performance, with solid vocals, acoustic guitar, and lyrics. The chord change at time index 2:39 was cool. Nice work, man! Good stuff!

Cheers,
Joseph
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: IronKnee on Apr 09, 2025, 04:21 AM
Hey there Chris.... it's a pretty well written lyric with a very relatable premise. The melody is very good, and one that catches the ear. It's a good song, man, and worth making into a solid studio version.
Your performance is really good, as well.
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: Elvis Nash on Apr 09, 2025, 05:28 AM
Quote from: muso1070 on Apr 08, 2025, 05:34 PMHello all

I recently finished this new song called Runnin I wanted to share.
I will go about recording a studio version in the not to distant future but love to hear any thoughts or feedback when its in its rawest form just acoustic and vocal.
Definitely a songwriters song with catchy melody.
Cheers


Sounds good man , Should be real good on a studio version with all the bells and whistles added

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgmNupU2BJk

Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: muso1070 on Apr 09, 2025, 11:34 AM
Hey Joseph, thank you appreciated your comment. I spent a little more time on the lyrics and chord progression than I would normally when writing this one.

Thanks again

Quote from: icystorm on Apr 08, 2025, 06:30 PMWelcome to the forum, Chris. This is an excellent song and live performance, with solid vocals, acoustic guitar, and lyrics. The chord change at time index 2:39 was cool. Nice work, man! Good stuff!

Cheers,
Joseph
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: muso1070 on Apr 09, 2025, 04:07 PM
Awesome buddy thank you sounds like a full green light from yourself cheers.
Very much looking forward to getting stuck into the full version.

Thanks

Quote from: IronKnee on Apr 09, 2025, 04:21 AMHey there Chris.... it's a pretty well written lyric with a very relatable premise. The melody is very good, and one that catches the ear. It's a good song, man, and worth making into a solid studio version.
Your performance is really good, as well.
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: muso1070 on Apr 10, 2025, 09:14 AM
Thank Elvis Nash! Yes definitely looking forward to recording this one. I will be sure to not over cook it either. Think it needs a bit of space too, less is more etc.
Cheers


Sounds good man , Should be real good on a studio version with all the bells and whistles added

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgmNupU2BJk

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Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: ChrisPrice on Apr 16, 2025, 12:07 AM
Greetings from another Chris! A much older one in my case! I'm always happy to hear a live performance like this. We need more of it these days with AI taking us all over.

A lovely track. Great playing and a great vocal. I love it. :)
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: muso1070 on Apr 22, 2025, 05:40 PM
Hey Chris

Great name ;-)
I couldn't agree more scary times a head for the music world with AI.
I love stripped down raw music myself that mostly what I listen to these days myself as well as creating it.
Thanks for the comment glad you enjoyed Runnin cheers.

Quote from: ChrisPrice on Apr 16, 2025, 12:07 AMGreetings from another Chris! A much older one in my case! I'm always happy to hear a live performance like this. We need more of it these days with AI taking us all over.

A lovely track. Great playing and a great vocal. I love it. :)
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: jazz101 on Apr 22, 2025, 11:43 PM
Hi,

Really enjoyed your song, love your gritty voice, well done,

George
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: muso1070 on Apr 25, 2025, 10:30 AM
Thanks George I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it cheers!
Probably down to singing 2 gigs that day back to back so the throat was husky for sure :-)

Quote from: jazz101 on Apr 22, 2025, 11:43 PMHi,

Really enjoyed your song, love your gritty voice, well done,

George
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: PeteS on May 09, 2025, 11:01 AM
I loved it!  Guitar work was great, love your voice and the arrangement was perfect.  Right up my street.
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on May 09, 2025, 07:22 PM
Welcome to the bus!!! God performance and dog!!!
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: OleAnders on May 19, 2025, 10:32 AM
Great live performance. Really like your singing. Song is well composed as well.Keep it up!
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: Vicki on May 21, 2025, 10:56 PM
I like it!
Title: Re: New song and live performance Runnin
Post by: mayaclars on May 27, 2025, 10:07 PM
@muso1070 ,

Definitely a catchy melody. And superb vocals! 
I also watched another videos on your YouTube channel.
Very talented songwriting and performance!
Definitely, I like this kind of music. :)

Maya