I struggled with this one
Really glad how the solo came together
Any feedback would be appreciated
I hope somebody likes it! :D
link:
https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/weve-been-everywhere?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing&si=b60e4f90c3fb41c3846ac170045c1deb
Lyrics:
we've been everywhere
get up here, get up on your feet
the tide will turn for those who resist defeat
we've been there, we know it too well
the weight of the world must carry itself
we don't care, Laissez-faire
we've been there
horizon, the promise of a distant shore
no longer troubles me, it holds no allure
body enraptured, still, my heart escapes
with no fucks to give, I need not relate
we don't care, Laissez-faire
we've been there
there's no going back to the shiny and new
so easy on the naked eye, and useful too
we've been everywhere
dragging y' dog through the most unrelenting pain
it's sure to end in tears and in shame
we don't care, Laissez-faire
we've been there
now what we have lost here had tactile value
all novelty aside for the tested and true
we've been everywhere
we've been everywhere
_________
Rightly
Thats cool man , nice production
You amaze me with your arrangements. I'm not too hot at interpreting lyrics, but yours always fascinate me. Your material is original in a very positive way and I love it. :)
Quote from: ChrisPrice on Apr 21, 2025, 11:27 PMYou amaze me with your arrangements. I'm not too hot at interpreting lyrics, but yours always fascinate me. Your material is original in a very positive way, and I love it. :)
Thanks, Chris. This one was more arduous. It demanded quute some editing. I stumbled through a 10-hour session just to get the instrumental break right. I didn't know it would, with it being new ground. I think it paid off, though. I think I'm advancing incrementally.
Rightly,
Liking the the backing track, it sets things up nicely with its bouncey rhythms.
Cool lyrics and vocals top it off well.
Nice one
Neil
Quote from: neil connor on May 02, 2025, 05:04 PMRightly,
Liking the the backing track, it sets things up nicely with its bouncey rhythms.
Cool lyrics and vocals top it off well.
Nice one
Neil
Glad you like the song Neil.
Quote from: Rightly on Apr 17, 2025, 07:35 PMI struggled with this one
Really glad how the solo came together
Any feedback would be appreciated
I hope somebody likes it! :D
link:
https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/weve-been-everywhere?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing&si=b60e4f90c3fb41c3846ac170045c1deb
Lyrics:
we've been everywhere
get up here, get up on your feet
the tide will turn for those who resist defeat
we've been there, we know it too well
the weight of the world must carry itself
we don't care, Laissez-faire
we've been there
horizon, the promise of a distant shore
no longer troubles me, it holds no allure
body enraptured, still, my heart escapes
with no fucks to give, I need not relate
we don't care, Laissez-faire
we've been there
there's no going back to the shiny and new
so easy on the naked eye, and useful too
we've been everywhere
dragging y' dog through the most unrelenting pain
it's sure to end in tears and in shame
we don't care, Laissez-faire
we've been there
now what we have lost here had tactile value
all novelty aside for the tested and true
we've been everywhere
we've been everywhere
_________
Rightly
Hey there Rightly.....Superb. I don't agree but many do.
Hints of military marching in the background with the repeated sentiment of "we don't care"...gets the point across. Works for me.