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Title: lasagna meal
Post by: mayaclars on May 23, 2025, 07:20 PM
Hi guys! Finally I created a song about lasagna! What do you think about this? :) Hope you like it!


LYRICS:

(People)
(People)
(Ha-ah)

May we never forget
The faces of our friends
How easier it will be
To know every man
Revealing yourself
By showing no proofs
You're giving yourself away

Blend with these people
Have my eyes on you
Through my telescope
The datum has been written
(Ah-ha)
Later you'll find out
What I'm about to do

Mind the manners
Differentiate each little thing
Like the stuff they carry in a purse
The lasagna meal
Ones are walking slowly
Others don't
They're running away
One call to my dumb phone
And I'm on my way

Mind the manners
Differentiate each little thing
Like the stuff they carry in a purse
(Huh) lasagna meal
Ones are walking slowly
Others don't
They're running away
One call to my dumb phone
(Chee-ka) I'm on my way

(Hah-ah, ta-ra-ah)
(Hm-mm, hm-mm)

You can go wherever far
It cannot be forever
I will see you when you're in the car
You're on the radar
Hands up!
Follow metric-based
Rational decisions
Don't waste any second on
Magical encryptions

Running, you keep running
To your darling
Your accomplice, say no
I know every corner
Of this house
Getting you
Won't take long

(Na-na-ah)
Mind the manners
Differentiate each little thing
Like the stuff they carry in a purse
The lasagna meal
(Mm! Lasagna meal!)
Ones are walking slowly
Others don't
They're running away
One call to my dumb phone
And I'm on my way

Mind the manners
Differentiate each little thing
Like the stuff they carry in a purse
(Huh) lasagna meal
Ones are walking slowly
Others don't
They're running away
One call to my dumb phone
(Chee-ka) I'm on my way

Blend with these people
Have my eyes on you
Through my telescope
The datum has been written
(Ah-ha)
Later you'll find out
What I'm about to do

(My eyes)
(My eyes)
My eyes on you
My eyes
My eyes on you
My eyes
Title: Re: lasagna meal
Post by: Dorian Urac on May 23, 2025, 08:43 PM
Very professional production! To me it sounds just as good as contemporary artists like B. Eilish and such. Out of curisosity, would you be willing to share what synths & plugins and such you used? Eager to learn from co-musicians who obviously know what they're doing.  :)

Greetzz, Dorian
Title: Re: lasagna meal
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on May 26, 2025, 05:37 PM
Hola @mayaclars
It has been a sooo good experience!!! Your talent is growing and growing!!! Very good story, arrangement, sound, it has been really entertaining. Big kisssss for you!
Title: Re: lasagna meal
Post by: subvibe on May 26, 2025, 07:33 PM
Hi
a bit different than your other songs
but still very good , great groove & mix

subvibe
Title: Re: lasagna meal
Post by: Vicki on May 27, 2025, 11:32 PM
Great song and fun video! You did a very nice job on it.
Title: Re: lasagna meal
Post by: IronKnee on May 29, 2025, 04:10 PM
What a great sound.... if I have a real nit, it would be that your singing of the lyrics is in a way that the meaning of the words is obscured.
With that said, this is a fantastic club floor number... where the words aren't necessary to follow to have a splendid dance.

BTW, I love lasagna and have a to-die-for recipe passed down the generations!  8)
Title: Re: lasagna meal
Post by: Dan on Jun 02, 2025, 02:41 PM
Really good. Makes me realise how lazy I am with polishing my production.