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Title: The stone and the foreign eyes
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jun 05, 2025, 05:57 PM

Hello people of this world of blue, green, gray, and so many colors, today I leave you with this song that I dare not define except as one of my own, with its secret language that only I understand.

I like the arrangement; I think I've managed to convey a disturbing feeling, especially at the end, although the appearance of the piano softens it a bit.

Be well

There is no clock that measures
the rhythm of what happens
inside my soul

I think about tomorrow
because today
life becomes so heavy
that it suffocates itself
betweem hours that never end

I am so still
that i seem like a stone
on a road
that does not exist
yet

I am a thousand questions
with no voice

a pilgrim with no hands
or feet
tied to the caprice of fate
when I hear your voice
so different from yours
when I see your eyes
so foreign
so foreign

Presentacion.mp4

Title: Re: The stone and the foreign eyes
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jun 22, 2025, 04:55 PM

https://photos.google.com/search/CgAiCBIGCgRyAgoAKO353ML5Mg%3D%3D/photo/AF1QipP8v0J5EU8BuwgGL_ecF6y8GudzCS7EOEt5NnH5 (https://photos.google.com/search/CgAiCBIGCgRyAgoAKO353ML5Mg%3D%3D/photo/AF1QipP8v0J5EU8BuwgGL_ecF6y8GudzCS7EOEt5NnH5)

Title: Re: The stone and the foreign eyes
Post by: subvibe on Jun 22, 2025, 08:34 PM

Hi
Great atmospheric sound
deep & warm , love the choice of instruments coming & going
a tormented feel you have captured perfectly

Great Stuff

subvibe

Title: Re: The stone and the foreign eyes
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jun 25, 2025, 09:55 AM

Quote from: subvibe on Jun 22, 2025, 08:34 PMHi
Great atmospheric sound
deep & warm , love the choice of instruments coming & going
a tormented feel you have captured perfectly

Great Stuff

subvibe

Thank you so much, I am not sure about this one, in the morning I like it but in the afternoon ... hahaha Changing moments, changing clouds. @subvive

Title: Re: The stone and the foreign eyes
Post by: jazz101 on Jul 04, 2025, 05:20 PM

Hi Mora,

atmospheric is definitely the word to describe this piece, you have a unique approach to music which always warrants a response. I really like the blend you have created in this song, once again well done Mora.

George or Jazz101

Title: Re: The stone and the foreign eyes
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jul 05, 2025, 06:25 PM

Quote from: jazz101 on Jul 04, 2025, 05:20 PMHi Mora,

atmospheric is definitely the word to describe this piece, you have a unique approach to music which always warrants a response. I really like the blend you have created in this song, once again well done Mora.

George or Jazz101

Glad to see you back!!! @jazz101
and commenting on my work!! wow, thank you, much appreciated. I hope all is ok there. Stay well George

Mora

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