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Title: In a dreamless time
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jul 14, 2025, 04:34 PM
There are moments that carry with them terrible and scaring thoughts....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Bf3zGgv154

 stick to the hours
and their rights of way

they are all neighbors
to each other
with their invisible but resonant
borders

that lead me
by the hand
amid conflicting moments
that confuse me
and frighten me
by making me think
sometimes
what i think
 
What I think
sometimes

Everything
nothing
words that divide me
pulling each one at an arm
until I become extremes
looking for each other
in a dreamless time
Title: Re: What I think
Post by: Vicki on Jul 15, 2025, 10:07 PM
Intriguing piece. The setting is great, as always. The words are mysterious and make me think of the state of the world these days and how people are kept apart by words and borders. Thoughtfully inspiring.
Title: Re: What I think
Post by: subvibe on Jul 16, 2025, 09:00 AM
Hi
as always a super production
It has a almost haunting feel to it
great choice of sounds & the guitar playing gives it a solid drive
Top Stuff

subvibe
Title: Re: In a dreamless time
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jul 23, 2025, 04:38 PM
Quote from: Vicki on Jul 15, 2025, 10:07 PMIntriguing piece. The setting is great, as always. The words are mysterious and make me think of the state of the world these days and how people are kept apart by words and borders. Thoughtfully inspiring.

Hola @Vicky
Sorry for my delay on answering, thank you so much and yes, the world goes bad with us inside this nightmare.