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Title: Last Night
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jul 26, 2025, 12:14 PM
Maybe, after reading the title, you can think you'll listen to a certain style but... I hope it surprises you.




This is the song the blackbird sang
last night
when rain and wind stopped to dance
letting the moon shine
in the puddles and all the waters of dreams

Note by note he did this melody
repeating them here and there
from branche to branche
in my backyear
He made me hum
on the other side of my window
under the light of my fears
leading me to a forest
full of forests
where space and sound
walked together
without moving
Title: Re: When rain and wind stopped to dance
Post by: Vicki on Jul 27, 2025, 01:06 AM
You are so prolific! And always so intriguing. It amazes me that you can put videos together so fast.
Title: Re: When rain and wind stopped to dance
Post by: IronKnee on Jul 27, 2025, 06:23 AM
WOW... so dark, so cool. Very Underground...En vogue
Title: Re: When rain and wind stopped to dance
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jul 27, 2025, 01:09 PM
Quote from: Vicki on Jul 27, 2025, 01:06 AMYou are so prolific! And always so intriguing. It amazes me that you can put videos together so fast.

Hola @Vicki
Gracias, you have to try, little by little you could reach amazing result!!! Have a nice day and a big kiss.
Mora
Title: Re: When rain and wind stopped to dance
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jul 28, 2025, 06:41 PM
Quote from: IronKnee on Jul 27, 2025, 06:23 AMWOW... so dark, so cool. Very Underground...En vogue

Not dark in its usual sense, but in a more subtle, perhaps disturbing or unexpected sense.
Gracias, always supporting others work.
Much appreciated @IronKnee
I hope all is ok there