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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: subvibe on Jul 29, 2025, 11:41 AM

Title: Lovely
Post by: subvibe on Jul 29, 2025, 11:41 AM


Hi
Here is a new song i have done , its sad & laid back

https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/lovely

Thanks for taking the time to listen

subvibe
Title: Re: Lovely
Post by: Vicki on Jul 30, 2025, 01:11 AM
I can't make out most of the words, but I really like the sound. So pretty. Beautiful voice. Nice production.
Title: Re: Lovely
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jul 30, 2025, 03:44 PM
It's true that the song is sad, from the first notes of the guitar, but it's beautiful. I think it's one of the most beautiful you've done because of its difference in color and intention. Very beautiful work, it inspires me to write.
@subvibe
Title: Re: Lovely
Post by: subvibe on Jul 31, 2025, 03:35 PM

Thanks @Mora Amaro La Loba   @Vicki 

thanks for listening & your comments
personally i am not happy with the song I made some rhythm changes
at the last minute & i think it clashes with other parts
i don't usually revisit a song  It is what it is
So on with the next one & hope it sounds better !!

subvibe