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Title: It's Hot
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jul 31, 2025, 07:04 PM
Hola,

I hope this song is something unexpected for you.


The heat entered the room
without hesitation
leaving me awake
watching your nape
your neck
your shoulder
your body

your back

I spy on your breathing
now slow
and I wonder what your dreams are
when your hand
caresses the pillow.

The smell of my sweat takes me to a past reality
when you and I drank in love and sin
shrouded in the same darkness
that today suffocates
and frightens me

I get up to look at the night
while an elusive moon
hides
putting and removing shadows
on the rooftops and in the corners.

It smells of wet earth
but the air doesn't move

not even the hours have passed
since the day everything changed

how hot it is
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: subvibe on Aug 05, 2025, 03:14 PM
Hi
its different than your other songs
the vocals fit perfect with the music
love the sub bass & atmospheric sounds drifting in & out
the song engulfs you & draws you in

Great Stuff


subvibe
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 08, 2025, 06:29 PM
Quote from: subvibe on Aug 05, 2025, 03:14 PMHi
its different than your other songs
the vocals fit perfect with the music
love the sub bass & atmospheric sounds drifting in & out
the song engulfs you & draws you in

Great Stuff


subvibe

Gracias!!! Have a nice weekend!!!
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: jazz101 on Aug 11, 2025, 03:29 PM
Hi Mora,

Got a nice surprise
 when the bass came in, you never disappoint, yet another moody marvel, well done,

George
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: Vicki on Aug 11, 2025, 10:30 PM
A dark and mysterious sound. Lots to hear. Great work!
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 13, 2025, 05:19 PM
Quote from: jazz101 on Aug 11, 2025, 03:29 PMHi Mora,

Got a nice surprise
 when the bass came in, you never disappoint, yet another moody marvel, well done,

George

aStrange things happen here hahaha I am sure I answered t you but... here I am, doing it again,
Hola George, glad to see you back here, thank you so much!!!
@jazz101
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 15, 2025, 08:22 AM
Quote from: Vicki on Aug 11, 2025, 10:30 PMA dark and mysterious sound. Lots to hear. Great work!

Hola @Vicki
I hope you are doing well there, nt too much heat?
Thank you so much for supporting the weight of the forum!!!!
Do you think some day it will recuperate its good health?
Big kiss
Mora
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: Vicki on Sep 12, 2025, 03:39 AM
It's hard to say, the activity hasn't reached historical levels so far, but I still find it is active enough to keep me engaged and then some. I think we're doing okay.


Quote from: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 15, 2025, 08:22 AM...Thank you so much for supporting the weight of the forum!!!!
Do you think some day it will recuperate its good health?
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: Elvis Nash on Oct 11, 2025, 04:16 AM
That is unexpected , bit sexy I must say , Vid looks great to flow this tale of exposure
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 12, 2025, 03:19 PM
Hola @Elvis Nash

Garcías!!
Well, the scene I'm describing is that of a couple after making love. He falls asleep and she thinks, haha.
I don't know what you thought. If I managed to convey that or not, all this surrounded by the stifling heat of a summer night.

Do you know? I like differences between singing in Spanish and in English, It's like being someone else. The same thing happens to me when I sing in French, each language has its own way of expressing itself, and that's amazing.

Have a nice day!!!
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: Elvis Nash on Oct 12, 2025, 07:53 PM
Quote from: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 12, 2025, 03:19 PMHola @Elvis Nash

Garcías!!
Well, the scene I'm describing is that of a couple after making love. He falls asleep and she thinks, haha.
I don't know what you thought. If I managed to convey that or not, all this surrounded by the stifling heat of a summer night.


Do you know? I like differences between singing in Spanish and in English, It's like being someone else. The same thing happens to me when I sing in French, each language has its own way of expressing itself, and that's amazing.

Have a nice day!!!


I'm still working on country slang , nice to speak so many languages
Title: Re: It's Hot
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 13, 2025, 07:40 AM
The wonderful thing about a language, one, two, or whatever, is that they become tools with which to construct landscapes of the soul, scenes that can be seen and felt. That's brilliant, and for that, you only need one.
You are a master in the art of capturing situations and feelings transporting us to the dramatic poetry of those moments.

All your country roughness envelops the heart of a great poet and writer. I'm not telling you this as a woman or a man, but as a writer.
Y eso es todo!!@ElvisNash