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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: subvibe on Aug 03, 2025, 02:59 PM

Title: Don't go Easy
Post by: subvibe on Aug 03, 2025, 02:59 PM


Hi

Here is a new song i have done
Its a Retro Pop Disco Dua Lipa type feel


https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/dont-go-easy

Thanks for taking the time to Listen


subvibe
Title: Re: Don't go Easy
Post by: Vicki on Aug 04, 2025, 02:29 AM
Like everything you do, that is beautiful! I did notice one thing I would suggest...sometimes when you have the word combinations "that you" or "don't you", they come out "that chew" and "don't chew". I know a lot of artists do it, even really famous ones, so I can understand doing it. Also, I can tell it might be difficult to clean that up in the combinations in this song. I tried and they really want to come out "chew", so you can ignore me. Everything else was amazing, as usual. I would love to have your voice!
Title: Re: Don't go Easy
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 05, 2025, 12:47 PM
I know Dua Lipa, my son worked with her a year ago, very interesting style, full of strength like this track, even being soft, sweet at some moments, it has a sex appeal very accentuated and I love this. Nice arrangement, very actual!   @subvibe
Title: Re: Don't go Easy
Post by: subvibe on Aug 05, 2025, 03:00 PM

Hi @Mora Amaro La Loba 

thats amazing you must be very proud of your son, She has become a mega star
not only a pretty face but also a great voice live . maybe i am wrong but i think
she has a retro disco type feel so thats why i thought i would try something with a similar style
obviously she is in a top studio with top engineers so a world away from my little attic studio !!

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