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Title: A Shore I've Never Seen
Post by: idunno on Aug 20, 2025, 10:33 PM
https://app.box.com/s/jrpb4cqh0g46outc6hsr9juvzihq4mss

A major rework of the lyrics.

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A Shore I've Never Seen

There's a shore I've never seen
A path I've never walked   
A world of places calling after me

Everyone hopes for the chance
To wake into their dreams
To find a life that's given to romance

All  the calls I've heard to wander
Always hung-up on
Never more than hollow joys of wonder

Years to go aflame and burning
Deep inside me now
Are the heart of me, a call to me, a yearning

Look beyond your measures
Look beyond your fears
Take a trip into your waning years
Try to find life's treasures
Try to make them yours
Seek a life beyond its cuts and cures

Hometowns rob a young man's vision
Blocking out his world
Leaving him a life of charmed illusion

Born to seek out chance and changes
With each waking step
Off the road life often prearranges.

And if I choose to seek the safety
Of a castle keep
I'll surely lose the fire that burns inside me

The sun will shine on me or not
The stars beyond it too
But I hear them say my time is all I've got

Look beyond your measures
Look beyond your fears
Take a trip into your waning years
Try to find life's treasures
Try to make them yours
Seek a life beyond its cuts and cures
Title: Re: A Shore I've Never Seen
Post by: Elvis Nash on Oct 06, 2025, 04:46 PM
Electic Celtic I guess , Sounds good man