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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 21, 2025, 05:36 PM

Title: Fire in your eyes
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 21, 2025, 05:36 PM
Hola!!! Here I am, with the hope that this forum will be resurrected



Sometimes
I forget that I love you
when I pour terrible words
over the silence
of my anger

Sometimes
you forget that you love me
when rage becomes fire
in the bottom of your eyes

Sometimes
we forget that we love us
and fight in a war
that erasess our yesterday
whenwe were one

Sometimes
life and time
shake their hands
to remove the dreams we had
under the moon and the sun

but but but

reality is our best friend
despite being a vampire
when you and me
become again
the landscape of each other
Title: Re: Sometimes I forget that I love you
Post by: subvibe on Sep 01, 2025, 11:15 AM

Hi

Nice song , it has a dark feel in my ears
the vocals have a touch of a artist called Amanda Lear
a top production as usual

keep them coming

subvibe
Title: Re: Fire in your eyes
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Sep 04, 2025, 02:45 PM
Hello hello @subvibe

It seems we're almost alone here, could we make a cocktail while we wait for more people to come to the bar!!!!
And thank you for your comment and your article.
Amanda Lear? Yes, I've been told several times that our voices are similar... I like mine better, hahaha, more feminine?
I'm starting to think about the ingredients of that cocktail I told you about...
Title: Re: Fire in your eyes
Post by: subvibe on Sep 04, 2025, 04:20 PM

Hi @Mora Amaro La Loba 

Yes its Cocktail Time !!
i feel a bit embarrassed about posting so many songs
i am retired so in-between walking my dog & playing with my lovely sweet granddaughter in the weekends
i find time to go into my little studio, Its a bit like therapy for me & takes me away for a few hours
& at least i don't have the stress i had when i was working & travelling everywhere

i don't know why the forum is so quite these days Anyway time for a cocktail 


subvibe