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Title: Focus
Post by: subvibe on Sep 12, 2025, 07:19 PM

Hi
My last 2 songs were up tempo so i decided to do something in a lounge style
soft & sensual   i really enjoy doing this style


Stream Focus by subvibe | Listen online for free on SoundCloud (https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/focus)

Thanks for taking the time to Listen

subvibe
Title: Re: Focus
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Sep 16, 2025, 04:59 PM
I really like the intro with that nostalgic piano, and then the appearance of the voice and the rest of the instruments, with that wonderful bass and that intimate, sweet, and romantic atmosphere!!! I've probably told you this before, but today this is my favorite!!! What a great job!!!  Bravo @subvibe
Title: Re: Focus
Post by: subvibe on Sep 16, 2025, 06:21 PM
Hi @Mora

Thanks for listening & your lovely comments
i really like doing this style , its a bit like SADE smooth & intimate
also trying to get a full sound with the minimal amount of instruments is a challenge
Its not a style that everyone likes & i think some will find it boring
but at the end of the day i get enjoyment doing it

thanks again for listening

subvibe
Title: Re: Focus
Post by: Rightly on Sep 26, 2025, 10:08 PM
Very sweet
And smooth
A fine, very polished production. Well done.