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Title: proxima
Post by: subvibe on Sep 29, 2025, 07:41 PM


Hi 
Here is a new song i have done , its in a pop/rock style

https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/proxima

Thanks for taking the time to Listen


subvibe
Title: Re: proxima
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Sep 30, 2025, 12:17 PM
Again, a good song, as you say, very contemporary, and as always, the sound, production, and work are great!!!
I like the percussion, which adds an interesting color to the mix.
@subvibe
Title: Re: proxima
Post by: subvibe on Sep 30, 2025, 07:19 PM
Hi @Mora Amaro La Loba 
Thanks for listening & your kind words

Its hard to think of something in a different style
but at least it keeps me busy 

muchas gracias

subvibe
Title: Re: proxima
Post by: Vicki on Oct 01, 2025, 05:45 PM
I always like creative rhymes, like far and apart.

I'm not listening as closely as I should these days. I had surgery to fuse three vetebrae a week ago, and it turns out recovery is a lot more painful than I expected. So I'm whinier than usual and need more distracting...

At any rate, I love the sound of this!

Vicki
Title: Re: proxima
Post by: subvibe on Oct 01, 2025, 06:03 PM
Hi @Vicki
Thanks for listening

wishing you a speedy recovery
get well soon

subvibe