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Title: Anxiety
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Sep 30, 2025, 07:31 PM
I did this song when I was feeling down, haha, and curiously, listening to it, it's full of power, or so it seems to me, just the way music works!

Aside from everything, I think it's a pretty accurate portrait, what do you think?




Anxiety
that devours me
and makes me hungry
for everything

yum yum yum

Anxiety
that devours me
and makes me hungry
for  cogarettes black or blond
I don't care

hm hm hm

for everything

yum yum yum yum yum

Anxiety

I am a zombie
wrapped in smoke
I am slave
of anxiety

I eat so I don't smoke
I smoke so I don`t eat

anxiety

It's like a hand pressing my guts
a magician that stole my will
there is no snap that wakes me up

anxiety
Title: Re: Anxiety
Post by: Elvis Nash on Oct 06, 2025, 04:01 AM
Sounds and looks great Mora !!!!
Title: Re: Anxiety
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 07, 2025, 08:23 AM
Quote from: Elvis Nash on Oct 06, 2025, 04:01 AMSounds and looks great Mora !!!!

Hola Elvis, nice to see you, thank you so much, I had a lot of fun dong this one, and a lot of work!!!@Elvis Nash
Title: Re: Anxiety
Post by: Veance on Oct 07, 2025, 01:58 PM
The intro wasn't that for me, maybe because the first instrument used a detune mode. The second was your voice and again with the detune mode on it. But from the moment the beat kicks in it sounds good. I found the overal sound a bit to bassy. There is a lot going on soundwise. Maybe there's some inmprovement there?
Title: Re: Anxiety
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 07, 2025, 08:05 PM
Quote from: Veance on Oct 07, 2025, 01:58 PMThe intro wasn't that for me, maybe because the first instrument used a detune mode. The second was your voice and again with the detune mode on it. But from the moment the beat kicks in it sounds good. I found the overal sound a bit to bassy. There is a lot going on soundwise. Maybe there's some inmprovement there?

Hola, I don't understand what you say.... First synth at the intro has no detune, as well as my voice! hahaha But maybe the overdrive I put on makes it sound like this in your ers...
No worry, it's an experimental one and I enjoyed playing with sounds...
Stay well @Veance 8)
Title: Re: A Zombie wrapped in smoke
Post by: Elvis Nash on Oct 10, 2025, 02:15 AM
Quote from: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 07, 2025, 08:23 AM
Quote from: Elvis Nash on Oct 06, 2025, 04:01 AMSounds and looks great Mora !!!!

Hola Elvis, nice to see you, thank you so much, I had a lot of fun dong this one, and a lot of work!!!@Elvis Nash


ha ha ha , most are . I felt like a a zombie for 4 months
Title: Re: A Zombie wrapped in smoke
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 10, 2025, 06:20 PM

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ha ha ha , most are . I felt like a a zombie for 4 months
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I hope you don't continue feeling like a zombie. It's painful to see your body falling apart and to feel such an exaggerated appetite even though it's for yourself. 8)
Gracias chico!