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Title: Let It Kill You
Post by: Elvis Nash on Oct 10, 2025, 02:04 AM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JC0gnNZapu8



https://www.youtube.com/shorts/zt9SQQb2PyY

Let It Kill You

 

[Verse]

The clock spins fast but the days move slow

A fire burns where the shadows grow

I touched the edge and it cut me deep

But I can't stop

I can't sleep

 

[Pre chorus]

The tighter I hold

The faster it fades

But I still run into the blade

 

[Chorus]

Find something you love and let it kill you

Let it break you

Let it thrill you

Let it pull you under

Drown in the blue

Find something you love and let it kill you

 

[Verse 2]

The mirror cracks when I meet its eyes

Truth tastes bitter but it's sweet in disguise

I chase the rush

I crave the fall

It's heaven's whisper or the devil's call

 

[Pre chorus]

The tighter I hold

The faster it fades

But I still run into the blade

 

[Chorus]

Find something you love and let it kill you

Let it break you

Let it thrill you

Let it pull you under

Drown in the blue

Find something you love and let it kill you

 

[Bridge]

Every breath feels like a dare

Every step

I'm gasping air

But I'd rather burn than fade away

Loving the pain

Dying to stay

 

[Pre Chorus]

The tighter I hold

The faster it fades

But I still run into the blade

 

[Chorus]

Find something you love and let it kill you

Let it break you

Let it thrill you

Let it pull you under

Drown in the blue

Find something you love and let it kill you

Let it kill you , let it kill you , Let it kill you
Title: Re: Let It Kill You
Post by: icystorm on Oct 28, 2025, 04:33 PM
@Elvis Nash — This is a very good song, man! Very clear sound. Excellent acoustic guitar, strong vocals, interesting lyrics with a message, and a professional mix/production. Nice work! :D

Cheers,
Joseph
Title: Re: Let It Kill You
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 29, 2025, 11:49 AM
Very deep everything when listening in a so raining day here, yes, what we love kill us Elvis