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Title: If I were an Angel
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 17, 2025, 05:38 PM
It's been a few days since I made this song, and now that I listen to it again, it seems different? Hahaha, but I like it. The mix surprises me today but I hope it doesn't tomorrow! I hope it entertains you.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEGekUhl9VQ


Falling
falling
into my void
so deep
with no end
and so cold
 
and as I fall
I think of me
I thin of you
I think of those I love
I think of birds
I think of cats
of evrything under the sun
 
If I were an angel
would I be rising
not falling

would I tripped over the stone
waiting for me on the road
 
If I were an angel
would I have loved like I do

What good are my eyes
in this darkness
What good are my screams
if they stay inside me
 
I can't even hold
on to madness
because she is laughing
as I fall
hahaha
Title: Re: If I were an Angel
Post by: Elvis Nash on Oct 25, 2025, 10:01 PM
Hey Mora , Very pretty song and lovely vid.
Title: Re: If I were an Angel
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 26, 2025, 02:36 PM
Quote from: Elvis Nash on Oct 25, 2025, 10:01 PMHey Mora , Very pretty song and lovely vid.
Glad you are here and commenting on my work!!! Much appreciated @Elvis Nash
Lately, I've been having a strange feeling of isolation here.
Stay well
Title: Re: If I were an Angel
Post by: subvibe on Oct 28, 2025, 10:56 AM
Hi @mora

Wonderful atmospheric sounds. vocals warm & seductive
amazing mix with a great balance
well done

subvibe
Title: Re: If I were an Angel
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Oct 29, 2025, 11:40 PM
Quote from: subvibe on Oct 28, 2025, 10:56 AMHi @mora

Wonderful atmospheric sounds. vocals warm & seductive
amazing mix with a great balance
well done

subvibe


So glad you like it
@subvibe
I had a lot of work searching sounds to create an interesting atmosphere, I think that I did it finally!!!
See you soon me alegra verte comentando en mi trabajo.