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Title: Once Upon A Bar
Post by: Elvis Nash on Nov 22, 2025, 06:59 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bODdWkj4-tk
Title: Re: Once Upon A Bar
Post by: icystorm on Nov 22, 2025, 11:24 PM
@Elvis Nash – Good song. I'm not really into country, but you've produced a solid track, man. Nice job!
Title: Re: Once Upon A Bar
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Nov 23, 2025, 11:31 AM
Lovely arrangement wrapping so fine the voice!!! Another great song Elvis!
Please, I know lyrics appear on the vid but can you share them here?
Thank you

 
Title: Re: Once Upon A Bar
Post by: Elvis Nash on Nov 23, 2025, 02:52 PM
Yeah I can't find them , it was done a year ago or more . it basically like operator by Croce structure , Hook in verses not chorus
Title: Re: Once Upon A Bar
Post by: muso1070 on Nov 25, 2025, 04:41 PM
Excellent production on this Elvis loving your voice very much something I would listen to regularly well done!

Quote from: Elvis Nash on Nov 22, 2025, 06:59 PMhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bODdWkj4-tk
Quote from: Elvis Nash on Nov 22, 2025, 06:59 PMhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bODdWkj4-tk
Title: Re: Once Upon A Bar
Post by: ChrisPrice on Dec 06, 2025, 08:35 PM
Well, you know I think about your songs and this one is great. I do prefer the ones that you sing because you have such a great voice. And I'm a sucker for songs about a bar room!! My mis-spent youth I guess!!
Title: Re: Once Upon A Bar
Post by: subvibe on Dec 09, 2025, 09:43 AM

Hi

Love the production & vocals
don't know much about country but this sounds fantastic

subvibe
Title: Re: Once Upon A Bar
Post by: Elvis Nash on Dec 14, 2025, 11:06 PM
its a pretty simple song , thanks guys