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Title: Upon touching me
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Nov 29, 2025, 11:57 AM
They say love arrives with an arrow that pierces your heart... it's true, what they don't say is that the speed of that arrow is always different in each case.


Come towards me
and let me look at you,
let yourself  be caught up with me
by the warm of our eyes

let me find
once more
the light that shines in them,
sun of the soul
that gives me life
upon touching me.

Let your breath
come close to mine
and without kissing
let me want it,
imagine it,
moment that becomes everlasting,

thirst for you, for your mouth,
fire that springs from fire.


make my gesture a mirror
and hug me in silence,

slowly,
Title: Re: Upon touching me
Post by: muso1070 on Nov 29, 2025, 01:56 PM
Cool production here Mora, love the bass and the finger clicks. Great vocals as well.
Title: Re: Upon touching me
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Nov 30, 2025, 05:17 PM
Quote from: muso1070 on Nov 29, 2025, 01:56 PMCool production here Mora, love the bass and the finger clicks. Great vocals as well.

Hola @muso1070
Gracias, I like a lot this one, was reviewing y songs and plot, I listened to it and I enjoyed as if it weren't mine!!!!
There are some wonderful parts here, nice fusions, yes.
Stay wellll
Title: Re: Upon touching me
Post by: Vicki on Dec 01, 2025, 03:43 AM
Your works are always intriguing. I often find them (including this one) a bit mesmerizing, with the steady beat throughout. And your videos, always abstract and hypnotic. Another good one, as always.
Title: Re: Upon touching me
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Dec 02, 2025, 10:40 AM
Hola @Vicki
Me alegra leerte, glad to see you, thank you so much, this oe is one of my favorites, I like the fusion of styles it has within and the video is really funny!!!
I am a lucky one, I can use my gifts, thinking, writing, music and painting videos!!! And listen to the others..... m sure I have many things to discover within myself that I should apply to my life, but for now my intelligence can't find them... or who knows, maybe it's my selfishness! Although, you know what? I think selfishness is a facet of intelligence, that selfishness that makes you take care of others so they get better and are busy with that task so they leave you in peace,LOL

A big kiss for you, I hope you are doing well and preparing new songs!!! or lyrics! or something to share with us.
Mora
Title: Re: Upon touching me
Post by: ChrisPrice on Dec 06, 2025, 08:09 PM
Yeah, I like that bass line and the production is top drawer as always. I enjoyed the video to this one too. It come over as quite an intimate song to me.

A great track Mora. :)
Title: Re: Upon touching me
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Dec 07, 2025, 12:49 PM
I'll break the ice by replying to your lovely comment. I'm happy to see there are boats on the lake. @ChrisPrice
Much appreciated
Title: Re: Upon touching me
Post by: subvibe on Dec 09, 2025, 09:38 AM

Hi @Mora Amaro La Loba 
love this vibe ,,  the bass drives it perfectly
the song has a sleazy feel & the vocals work perfectly 
great atmospherics  

subvibe  
Title: Re: Upon touching me
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Dec 09, 2025, 11:20 AM
Hola, muchas gracias, I hope you are preparing Christmas time while humming future new songs!!!