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Title: On the wings of the crows
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Dec 08, 2025, 01:08 PM
Hola a todos and Merry Christmas!!!
I hope this one can entertain you!!! Snow and Christmas sometimes and in many sites go by the hand!!!




It was cold,
a dog barked at the night
and the silence that remained  was still heavy.

It was cold
the snow that was falling
left flowers with thorns
on the wings of the crows

The black and white merged
and the coming dawn
gave it its grayish tone
from its early glass.

Everything and nothing came together
getting lost in the sky,
the sea and the air spoke to each other
and the silence that remained
was still heavy.

It was cold on either shore of waiting
the ghost of hope threw stones
into the water of indifference
but they barely made a sound
as they bounced
among frozen waves
and the silence that remained
was still heavy