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Title: Ten Thousand Angels
Post by: Elvis Nash on Dec 16, 2025, 04:15 AM
https://www.mixcloud.com/ElvisNash/ten-thousand-angels/
Recorded at https://www.studio132.com/about.html


I blamed God for all my problems in life
And why everything didn't turn out right
But when I died at the strike at midnite
This is what I crossing the finish line
Ch
It was beautiful
Standing in paradise
I had a long talk with Jesus Christ
And the devil in my soul he lost that fight
I'll spend eternity
With 10,000 angels in Holy lights
V2
I didn't die it was all a sweet dream
"Cinematic Technicolor" 73
when that thief trys to steal my faith
I look up and know what's coming my way
Ch
Bridge
Friends and family they'll have silver wings
In harmony will begin to sing
Ch

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Title: Re: Ten Thousand Angels
Post by: icystorm on Dec 16, 2025, 04:32 AM
@Elvis Nash — It's a cool mid-tempo country-rock track, man! Strong vocals, excellent acoustic guitars, some interesting chord changes, and lyrics that convey a good story. The production and mix by Lewis created a very good vibe for the song. Your vocals are really clear and smooth, as compared to your usual gruff and gravely voice (which worked well in earlier songs I've listened to from you).

Good song, man! I enjoyed listening. ;D

Cheers,
Joseph
 
Title: Re: Ten Thousand Angels
Post by: Elvis Nash on Dec 16, 2025, 04:56 AM
Quote from: icystorm on Dec 16, 2025, 04:32 AM@Elvis Nash — It's a cool mid-tempo country-rock track, man! Strong vocals, excellent acoustic guitars, some interesting chord changes, and lyrics that convey a good story. The production and mix by Lewis created a very good vibe for the song. Your vocals are really clear and smooth, as compared to your usual gruff and gravely voice (which worked well in earlier songs I've listened to from you).

Good song, man! I enjoyed listening. ;D


The world might hate us , But Jesus loves us

Thanks
Merry Xmas

Cheers,
Joseph
 
Title: Re: Ten Thousand Angels
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Dec 16, 2025, 11:56 AM
heard this song on another forum and loved it, and I'm enjoying it again today. Great job, Elvis! I always learn something from your work, even though they say it's easier to pick up ugliness than beauty, haha.

I wish you love, health, good friends and money, and while all this is happening, Merry Christmas.Merry Christmas
Title: Re: Ten Thousand Angels
Post by: Elvis Nash on Dec 17, 2025, 02:37 PM
Lets hope its real and we leave one day . thats not Nashville , its Bz Lewis in San Fran Studio . He works you , sing it again . This is hard , ya think ? Do I sound like Dylan ? Naw
Thanks