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Title: Tightrope
Post by: Tolo on Dec 05, 2024, 10:34 AM
Hello folks - both old & new friends...

Please find my latest effort - feedback / suggestions / advice on all fronts appreciated...

https://app.box.com/s/69yn8yy5pne4l8gd5y7g1bc3q1aj04v6
Title: Re: Tightrope
Post by: Nick Ryder on Dec 06, 2024, 01:14 PM
Hi, @Tolo

I have listened to this a few times now and it is difficult for me to offer any constructive criticism as it is so well produced and mixed.

What is your intention for it? Will it be on an album track of instrumentals, or maybe you're pitching it for Sync work?

Or, do you at some stage plan to turn it into a song with vocals (although at this stage I'm struggling to think how that would work).

It has a very epic feel to it and I can here some of the sections being used in aftershave adverts, or on reality TV gameshows (Race Around the World springs to mind).

But as I say, as it is and without context of what you intend it for, I cannot offer any meaningful advice on how I would improve it :)

Title: Re: Tightrope
Post by: ChrisPrice on Dec 07, 2024, 10:03 PM
Wow.. This knocked my socks off!! Some fabulous instrumentation here. I'd have to agree with Nick's comments here. I was almost waiting for a vocal to kick in. But, yeah, it sounds like it belongs in a film. Incredibly well done.  :)