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Title: Real Live desperado
Post by: jazz101 on Feb 24, 2026, 12:40 PM
Hi all, I wrote this song for a singer in Spain, I thought I would give country a go. Hope you like it,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HrVCyZT-E90

Title: Re: Real Live desperado
Post by: calafinestrat on Feb 25, 2026, 08:38 AM
You have the perfect voice for country music, I'm jealous!!
Title: Re: Real Live desperado
Post by: muso1070 on Feb 25, 2026, 11:21 AM
Great song I enjoyed the acoustic guitar parts the most and good lyrics cool vibe.
Title: Re: Real Live desperado
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 08, 2026, 10:46 AM
Great lyrics here!!
I think you used Suno or something similar for the arrangement? And the vocals? That's great for getting an idea of ��how a song might sound.
You say you wrote this song for a singer in Spain, I'm not sure if you mean Spanish or someone who lives in Spain... It depends on her singing style; it might suit her or not... the point is, the lyrics are very good.

Stay well. @jazz101
Title: Re: Real Live desperado
Post by: jazz101 on Mar 28, 2026, 09:22 AM
Hi Guys,

Thank you for the great comments (well mostly) I have to say it was not me singing (I get my singers from Fiverr) I  used to sing but was diagnosed with Abducter Dysphonia (affects the vocal chords) so my singing days are over. Mora Hi I hope you are well, once again you think my song is from Suno and once again I have to tell you it is not. I wrote the song and recorded the backing track using my arranger keyboard, the electric guitar parts were done by a friend from Brazil, and the singer, as I said before I got from Fiverr. You could always put the songs through an AI song checker. Apologies for the time it has take to get back to you, I have been trying for some time to get on the site, I kept getting a 404 error, so maybe the site was down, anyway thanks guys, all the best,

George
Title: Re: Real Live desperado
Post by: jazz101 on Mar 28, 2026, 09:25 AM
Oh and Mora, the singer from Spain is actually an English guy, who has lived there a long time and I think the song would suit his voice, hope you are well, all the best,

George
Title: Re: Real Live desperado
Post by: Elvis Nash on Mar 29, 2026, 11:22 PM
Good song man , Naw you can tell thats not Suno

Good job man , I hope you sell that song , its a real real real tuff market
Title: Re: Real Live desperado
Post by: jazz101 on Mar 30, 2026, 10:37 PM
Hi Elvis,

Thanks man, yeah I know it's a tough market, I just wish I was a bit more media savvy, but we just keep plugging on, all the besy,

George
Title: Re: Real Live desperado
Post by: melroy pheasant on Apr 08, 2026, 02:14 PM
Great chorus that takes the listener by surprise with its structure. Brave to do a country song with 'Desperado' in the title, but it stands by itself. Very good mood and swagger.Guitar licks are the kind I like in country.
Title: Re: Real Live desperado
Post by: jazz101 on Apr 11, 2026, 05:08 PM
Hi Melroy,

appreciate your comments, First time trying country, but I got into it,

George