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Title: A song with a wintry vibe
Post by: muso1070 on Feb 25, 2026, 11:17 AM
Winter love song and a bit of a waltz enjoy lyrics also below ;-)

https://youtu.be/zKpXdYQn_yM

LYRICS
I like thunder storms, a front seat ticket on a long train home I...    I...
I wish you were here reading your book and facing your fears I...  I...
I feel like i'm lost all the signs look like they've been crossed I...    I...

I like to dance with you under the streetlight under the street light.
Close your eyes now listen to the sound of the night listen to the sound at night.

I like winter time the leaves are gone and the nights are long I...    I...
I wish I was home sitting with you and not here alone I...    I...
I now it want be long until im back and we have fun I...    I...

I like to dance with you under the streetlight under the street light.
Close your eyes now listen to the soundof the night listen to the sound at night.
Title: Re: A song with a wintry vibe
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 08, 2026, 10:52 AM
No comments?  Hmm
Love songs are always a good idea!!! I liked your lyrics a lot, but I think your voice needs more volume, The guitar chords drown it out a little, they don't let you hear the story clearly.

Cheers

Mora
Title: Re: A song with a wintry vibe
Post by: muso1070 on Mar 08, 2026, 11:05 AM
Thanks Mora Amaro nice to hear from you I agree totally the voice could be a little louder but I wasn't to bothered by it as its just a live capture. Sometimes hard when mixing live but I'll turn it up a little more next time thanks for the heads up :-)