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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 08, 2026, 05:17 PM

Title: Among Arrows and Hearts
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 08, 2026, 05:17 PM
Life has grown so dark lately, the sky spits fire, the earth trembles, and so do we. And while all this is happening, some sow flowers and others reap them. I leave you one here, even if it's plastic, ha ha ha.


I remember that tree
where our names remain together
surrounded by other names
among arrows and  hearts

I remember your hand in mine
the two of us strolling silent
knowing that sooner or later
reality would blow so hard
that it would separate our paths

We were each other's fruit,
children unveiling dreams,
we were so many things
that it seemed that universe
was not enough to keep our kisses

you with your cracked life
and me extinguishing the flames
of the ruins in fire of mine

Today, today,

I remember your mouth,
despite the time that has passed,
love carved in wood
in a forgotten garden


Today, today
Title: Re: Among Arrows and Hearts
Post by: Elvis Nash on Mar 29, 2026, 11:24 PM
Hey Mora thats great angle on cupid , good job girl
Title: Re: Among Arrows and Hearts
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 30, 2026, 08:47 PM
Quote from: Elvis Nash on Mar 29, 2026, 11:24 PMHey Mora thats great angle on cupid , good job girl

Hola Elvis
Title: Re: Among Arrows and Hearts
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Mar 31, 2026, 10:42 AM
Quote from: Elvis Nash on Mar 29, 2026, 11:24 PMHey Mora thats great angle on cupid , good job girl

Thank you

This forum sometimes seems surreal to me, like it's from another dimension, appearing and disappearing, a literary and sonic UFO with messages that never go anywhere hahaha but, optimism within tragedy is the ideal counterpoint

Stay well

Mora