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Title: Devil with a fire in her eyes
Post by: jazz101 on Apr 02, 2026, 01:25 AM
Hi,

This is a song I wrote thirty five years ago,

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/qk7bsn6307mz80axrm95q/Devil-with-a-fire-in-her-eyes.mp4?rlkey=4z1s6ai2o8urucug479t9j9af&st=rqderzbb&dl=0

 I am hoping it still holds, who knows, feedback appreciated,

George
Title: Re: Devil with a fire in her eyes
Post by: melroy pheasant on Apr 06, 2026, 05:17 PM
It's definitely got an 80s vibe. From the great guitar and the apposite lyrics. Sounds a bit familiar...Bryan Adams sings a ZZTop lyric in general, but melody-wise something specific. Anyway, hits the genre with a bullseye. A teen movie of the era NEEDED this song.
Title: Re: Devil with a fire in her eyes
Post by: jazz101 on Apr 11, 2026, 05:12 PM
Thanks Melroy, appreciate your feedback,

George
Title: Re: Devil with a fire in her eyes
Post by: ChrisPrice on May 06, 2026, 01:06 AM
Loving this. As has already been said, Bryan Adams springs to mind. Yeah, it's an 80's vibe but it's really well played and produced. Thirty five years ago..wow. Mind you, I go back quite a bit further! A great track. :)