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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Mora Amaro La Loba on May 12, 2026, 01:16 PM

Title: Grimaces and Tears
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on May 12, 2026, 01:16 PM
Hola dormant forum!! Here is my latest one, a dark song with special lyrics

https://youtu.be/R-65uD980Hs

Today is a day of tears
amidst confused thoughts,

Tragedy turned to rage
and stirs the curtains
that frame the drama


Bitter tears and grimaces
longing to be smiles
languish on the faces
as if they were a simple mask


Silences answering questions,
fears in wide open eyes,
ears that have gone deaf...

Everything and nothing
become friends
as they open together the box
of the irremediable
Reality
breaks down the doors
while the dreams
are still nude
Tragedies that smell like candles
tragedies that smell like candles
Reality
breaks down the doors
while the dreams
are still nude