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Title: Nothing chases me but the echo of my heals
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jun 04, 2026, 06:50 PM
Night and rain, echoes, steps and hotels, motion in the song.




I walk quickly
quickly
nothing chases me
but the echo of my heels

it rains slowly
slowly
as I cross avenues
and almost sleeping corners 

Colorful neons signs,
as well as the  lights of lamps,
plunge into the puddles
in a world of patent leather
that shines, without the sun.

I'm cold
cold
the water soaks my back,
and seeps down my neckline,
but its cold, brings me calm,
but its cold, brings me calm.

I carry in my eyes,
his eyes,
looking avid at her,
I carry in my ears,
his voice,
talking sweetly to her,            (thank you @Frank Turner12
with so intimate words,
that they made me hate myself,
for having  been so much his.

I walk quickly
quickly
pretending I'm another
despite I am the same

I left mutely
mutely
goodbyes were no necessary
in the bar of that hotel 
Title: Re: Nothing chases me but the echo of my heals
Post by: Elvis Nash on Jul 16, 2026, 02:49 PM
Frank Turner lol


This is good Mora . You sure got them vids down , must be a ton of work .
Title: Re: Nothing chases me but the echo of my heals
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 01, 2026, 07:52 PM
Quote from: Elvis Nash on Jul 16, 2026, 02:49 PMFrank Turner lol


This is good Mora . You sure got them vids down , must be a ton of work .

Hola chico
My reply is late, I'm sorry, well, that's how I keep the channel moving... a tiny ripple in this sea of ��words...

Yes, making the videos is really hard work, almost more so than the song itself, but this summer I'm using footage from my other videos. It's so hot and I don't feel like working with lights and green screens... Autumn will come... I suppose. Thanks for asking...
See you

Mora
Title: Re: Nothing chases me but the echo of my heals
Post by: BeatlesFan64 on Aug 08, 2026, 06:38 PM
Beautifully executed as always, Mora. I really admire the way you create art and make the music and video flow perfectly together. The lyrics are like poetry, always an adventure. I could feel the rain falling, imagine the neon lights and the sound of heels clicking on the ground. Very nice :).
Title: Re: Nothing chases me but the echo of my heals
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 09, 2026, 11:13 AM
Quote from: BeatlesFan64 on Aug 08, 2026, 06:38 PMBeautifully executed as always, Mora. I really admire the way you create art and make the music and video flow perfectly together. The lyrics are like poetry, always an adventure. I could feel the rain falling, imagine the neon lights and the sound of heels clicking on the ground. Very nice :).

Hola!!! lad to see you here.. too!!!! Thank you for your nice comment and welcome back!!!

Mora