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Title: What would you dream
Post by: jazz101 on Dec 11, 2024, 07:20 PM

Hi Guys,

This is a song I wrote about what would happen if we were all on the same page, hope you like it, any feedback appreciated, George.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M9eBb1fs-9c

Title: Re: What would you dream
Post by: Vicki on Dec 17, 2024, 03:24 AM

That's a beautiful song. I especially like these kinds of topics, too. I don't have much for feedback. I noticed one thing, and I know professionals do this all the time, but I prefer clear enunciation on word combinations like "would you" (instead of wouldjoo). A small thing and didn't keep me from loving and enjoying the song.

Vicki

Title: Re: What would you dream
Post by: jazz101 on Dec 17, 2024, 05:11 PM

Thank you, all feedback is welcome.

Title: Re: What would you dream
Post by: icystorm on Dec 23, 2024, 05:22 AM

@jazz101 -- This is a very good track. It's smooth and polished. The music and vocals blend well together in the mix, which is very clear. The sentiments of the song's lyrics are very laudable. Nice work to everyone involved. I enjoyed listening! :D

Title: Re: What would you dream
Post by: jazz101 on Dec 23, 2024, 01:06 PM

Thank you,

your feedback is always appreciated,

George

Title: Re: What would you dream
Post by: Elvis Nash on Dec 30, 2024, 07:12 PM

Hey George lovely tune to start the new year

Title: Re: What would you dream
Post by: jazz101 on Jan 01, 2025, 02:04 PM

Hi Elvis,

Thanks your comments are always welcome,

George

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