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Hey everyone! Happy new 2025 year! To close this 2024, I released my new song 'No Gravity', a little gift for you! :) As always, please feel free to share your opinion as it helps me to write my songs better. Thank you so much for your support! Wishing everyone be the healthiest and the happiest :)

LYRICS:

Yes, there's no way
We endure all the pain
That we had
Let's just hope that no gravity
Will somehow save us

Yes, we can travel different planets
Choose whatever feels connected
To your gut or to, to your future
Anyway, we do not matter

Yes, there's no space
No true face
So embrace aerobase
Engineer our self defense
Just in case if we faint

And I don't wanna know
I don't wanna think
If we should believe
Everything you say
Don't manipulate
Oh, I know all the games
You don't even know
Who I am

Yes, we can travel different planets
Choose whatever feels connected
To your gut or to, to your future
Anyway, we do not matter

Yes, we can travel different planets
Choose whatever feels connected
To your gut or to, to your future
Anyway, we do not matter

Attention, please
The outer airlock door is now
Disengaging
Please ensure the area is clear
And secure before proceeding
With exit operations, thank you

When we flow, when we flow
Do we even feel less lonely
Or when it's gone, when it's gone
Does it make us feel alone?

Oh yes, we can travel different planets
Choose whatever feels connected
To your gut or to, to your future
Anyway, we do not matter

So adorable, It takes forever
To forget the ground or sand
And feel no air
Ain't no gravity control
Coz we know better
How the sun survives in the dark


official website: https://mayaclars.com/ (https://mayaclars.com/)
I might do a little stream later today on my YouTube and Twitch channels, so feel free to join!

@mayaclars – Your new track, "No Gravity," is excellent. Your great vocals, combined with the synth-pop music, work really well together. The production and mix are clear. Your lyrics are intriguing and unique. I like your closing lines the most:

So adorable, it takes forever
To forget the ground or sand
And feel no air
Ain't no gravity control
'Cause we know better
How the sun survives in the dark

Very thought-provoking! :D

Also, your animated video, customized to fit your brand, is very good. I enjoyed listening to the song and watching the video. Great work! :D

This is lovely! Almost trancelike--with a beat that keeps me going. I can close my eyes and kind of float to it.

As ever, I love it.  Whilst only being on the edge of what I might listen to, your tunes and production are always interesting.

hola preciosa!!! Feliz año!! Glad to her you again, it's a special song with a special style, nice changes and atmospheres with which you play so well!!! I enjoyed t all
Un beso

OH WOW @mayaclars

This is simply AWESOME - great job

Your vocals are superb - VERY commercial sounding, which is the biggest compliment I can give

Even the spoken bit has a great quality to it

I love the production - everything is as smooth as silk and the mix is great

The ONLY thing I can think to suggest, is that the very end sounds a bit "weak" compared to the rest of the track - i.e. stopping and letting the drums carry on a bit - I think just ending on a "hit" and letting the reverb trails and delays carry on would be a stronger - or extend the refrain and fade out - but that is just a personal opinion

One of the most original and commercially viable songs that I have heard in a long time - FANTASTIC STUFF!