Hi Guys,
This is my foray into electronic music, would be interested on your feedback, thanks,
George
I don't really have any feedback--this type of music is outside my area of expertise. I *can* say I would love to be able to put together something like that. It had a great foot-tapping beat. Reminded me of scenes I've seen in TV shows and movies of people moving through a crowded club with people dancing.
Hi Vicki,
Thanks for your feedback, it all counts and gives me an idea of what works and what doesn't,
George
Your attempt on EDM is very good, nice beats and cool ambients, I like a lot the bassss!!!!
Hi Mora
Thanks for that, I just wanted to try something different,
George
Hi
Not really my Genre But its well recorded & a good solid beat
i think it would go down well in Clubs
subvibe
It is great to hear you trying something a bit different
@jazz101 My feedback would be...
You have made some great sound and beat choices
I am not personally a fan of "fade ins" in any genre
I think the whole thing sounds a bit "soft" for modern EDM - I would find a way to "rough some bits up" - e.g. a filthy/dirty bass or a distorted lead synth sound
At the moment the sections feel very different and the transitions are a bit "stark"
I would suggest 2 things...
Find some nice "build and crash" sound effects to go across the transitions between section
It would also help to keep a "constant" throughout the whole track that the listener can use as an "anchor" - this would usually be a vocal, but in an instrumental, I would suggest finding a single "lead synth" type sound and use this as a constant - and then revolve all of the other sounds etc. around this
For a first foray though...great job!
Hi Boydie,
great comments which I will take on board the next time I give it a try, your feedback is appreciated,
George
Not really my genre, but this sounds the business to my old ears. I was half expecting a vocal to come in. If it's your first foray into this style then you've done a great job. I can't really add anything else as I don't know enough about this kind of music, but well done. :)
Thanks Chris,
Your feed back is always appreciated,
George