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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: subvibe on Jan 07, 2025, 11:12 AM

Title: Don't go There
Post by: subvibe on Jan 07, 2025, 11:12 AM


Hi
1st song of 2025 , Its a laid back Pop Song


Thanks for taking the time to Listen


subvibe



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Title: Re: Don't go There
Post by: Vicki on Jan 08, 2025, 08:39 PM
These days the forum seems to be full of production that sounds awesome, and this piece is no exception. When I hear songs like this, I keep saying I need to practice but don't seem to get around to it...

Anyway, I have no crits; this sounds great to me!

Vicki
Title: Re: Don't go There
Post by: Boydie on Jan 30, 2025, 03:24 PM
Another WONDERFUL pop masterclass @subvibe

This is just simply awesome and at the standard demos need to be

My only suggestion is that it feels to me a bit like the song is building up to an "explosion", which doesn't really come and I think it may just "elevate" the track to the next level

But this is just my opinion and an artistic choice

I absolutely love it and would genuinely suggest that you pitch some of tracks as they have that commercial edge

Great stuff!
Title: Re: Don't go There
Post by: subvibe on Jan 30, 2025, 06:35 PM
Hi @Boydie  & @Vicki
many thanks for your kind words Its encouraging
I think most people find my stuff too boring too smooth
at the end of the day its just for fun & my hobby I have
never had any commercial intentions I am far too old

my satisfaction is getting useful critic so i can improve

greetz
subvibe
Title: Re: Don't go There
Post by: ChrisPrice on Jan 30, 2025, 06:50 PM
You doing what you do so well. I'm in awe of your production skills. Everything is crystal clear. Really commercial in all the right ways. I enjoyed listening. :)