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Title: This That
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jan 10, 2025, 07:54 PM
Hola chicos!!! A new one, like the year!! I had a hard time with this one, mix was a problem but finally I think I reached it.

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Approx. translation)

I'm tired of understanding
this that
this that

I'm tired of letting me fall
on comfort
of accepting everything that happens

because
this that
devour me

They are the vampires
hidden in my questions
in any one

they appear in my head
and don't let me go

they stay there
there there
like a flashing neon
that lights me up
and leaves me in the shadow


I like flowers
I like love
I like everything

but but but

What does it serve to understand
if when I accept
the horizon seems darker
Title: Re: This That
Post by: icystorm on Jan 10, 2025, 09:06 PM
@Mora Amaro La Loba -- Another winning track! Nice! First, I like the title. I think it's a play on the phrase 'this and that' or 'this 'n that'. It's clever and it works. :D

Your composition is wonderful and it features your distinctive euro-pop signature music with a creative mix of drums, percussion, bass, guitars, and synths. The guitar solos were the highlight of the music.

Your vocals are great as always. It's always nice to hear you sing! :D

Your lyrics are creative and interesting. My favorite lines are:

They are the vampires
hidden in my questions
in any one

they appear in my head
and don't let me go


...but the other lyrics in your song are also evocative.  :D

Your video is among your best, featuring unique imagery and scenes. :D

I enjoyed listening to your new track and watching your new video. Both are a good way to start the young new year. Well done, and thank you for sharing your talents, Mora! :D

Cheers,
Joseph
 



Title: Re: This That
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jan 11, 2025, 07:33 PM
Hola
Despite your cold nick @icystorm  you always comment with warm words!! Thank you so much, I like this song, I think I reached a good mix and the guitar is really great adding a personal quality!
Have a bice weekend
Title: Re: This That
Post by: Vicki on Jan 11, 2025, 10:42 PM
This is kind of hypnotic...that insistent drum sound! You are inspiring me to figure out how to do interesting videos for my songs. Research required. Very nice!
Title: Re: This That
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jan 12, 2025, 01:23 PM
Quote from: Vicki on Jan 11, 2025, 10:42 PMThis is kind of hypnotic...that insistent drum sound! You are inspiring me to figure out how to do interesting videos for my songs. Research required. Very nice!

Hola @Vicki
Muchas gracias!!! The vids for your songs? You have found Suno for singing, sure there are other Ai options for videos but if you need my help here I am, the only thing you need is Adobe Premiere and a camera for your own footage, the rest is imagination in progres hahaha
Have a nice day!
Title: Re: This That
Post by: ChrisPrice on Jan 16, 2025, 09:05 PM
A great track Mora. But then all your tracks are great! Hard to say anything when it's this good. Keep up the good work. :)
Title: Re: This That
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jan 18, 2025, 09:57 AM
Quote from: ChrisPrice on Jan 16, 2025, 09:05 PMA great track Mora. But then all your tracks are great! Hard to say anything when it's this good. Keep up the good work. :)

Hola @ChrisPrice
Muchas gracias!!! hahaha you made me feel interesting!!!
Title: Re: This That
Post by: mattyoungmusic on Jan 20, 2025, 11:41 AM
Your work has such a one of a kind quality to it, and this is no exception.  The groove of this transports the listener someplace mysterious and hypnotic.  Excellent.
Title: Re: This That
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jan 29, 2025, 10:18 AM
hola y gracias, much ppreciated @mattyoungmusic