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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Skandha on Jan 12, 2025, 05:17 AM

Title: When I’ll see- lyrics
Post by: Skandha on Jan 12, 2025, 05:17 AM
Hi everyone
I'm an italian lyricist.
I use AI (Suno) to give life to my poems:
https://youtu.be/wRQyPk6uGBY?si=o0EWdOX-B2iaGT8s
Hope you enjoy!
Title: Re: When I’ll see- lyrics
Post by: Skandha on Jan 12, 2025, 05:19 AM
Ps. I wrote the beginning strings and I had to do a patchwork with three different songs Made by Suno.
Title: Re: When I’ll see- lyrics
Post by: Skandha on Jan 12, 2025, 05:26 AM
Pps. The theme of the song is devotion for a Deity.
Title: Re: When I’ll see- lyrics
Post by: Vicki on Jan 12, 2025, 09:50 PM
Hmm, I thought I had already responded to this one a few days ago, but I see it was just posted this morning?? I'm confused. Maybe I remember wrong--I might not have responded, but I'm certain I heard it.

Anyway, I enjoyed it. At least one video scene didn't seem quite right to me, but overall, nice job.
Title: Re: When I’ll see- lyrics
Post by: Skandha on Jan 13, 2025, 01:41 PM
Sorry Vicki,
I'm new in this forum. I thought I had to post both here and there to have feedback...😅🙂
Title: Re: When I’ll see- lyrics
Post by: Vicki on Jan 13, 2025, 03:12 PM
Ahh, mystery solved! If you have a finished song you want feedback on, you can post in Feedback on Finished Songs. Guidelines say to wait two weeks between posting songs.

If you just want to show off one which you have already released and on which you don't plan to make any changes, regardless of what people say, you can post in SHOWCASE for Released Songs.

If you're working on a song that you don't think is finished and you want feedback to help you decide how to proceed, you can post in Feedback on Works in Progress. Guidelines say to wait two weeks between posting songs.

There's also the "Lyrics" board, if you only want feedback on lyrics for a song. Guidelines say you can post up to three lyrics a week.

None of these require that you post on more than one board.

I hope I got that all right and I hope it helps!

Vicki
Title: Re: When I’ll see- lyrics
Post by: Skandha on Jan 14, 2025, 11:37 AM
Now it's clear for me, thank you very much!🙏