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Title: Thinking About You
Post by: subvibe on Jan 21, 2025, 06:27 PM
Hi
Here is a new song i have done
Its in a smooth laid back style


Stream Thinking about you by subvibe | Listen online for free on SoundCloud (https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/thinking-about-you)


Thanks for taking the time to Listen

subvibe
Title: Re: Thinking About You
Post by: Vicki on Jan 23, 2025, 03:04 AM
Very pretty sound. I can't make out all the words (as usual), but I can tell it's a sweet love song. I have one recommendation, but it has nothing to do with songwriting itself, and it isn't something that matters to everyone--your singer says "aboutchoo" a lot of times, and I am personally a fan of clear diction most of the time. I would recommend having her say "about you" clearly. I may be too much of a perfectionist and if you don't agree, feel free to ignore me.  ;D

Vicki
Title: Re: Thinking About You
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jan 24, 2025, 04:24 PM
Very smooth and great fusion of styles, you create always so cool atmospheres, this one has very catchy melodies on a really sweet backing.
Title: Re: Thinking About You
Post by: jazz101 on Feb 08, 2025, 07:32 PM
Really like this, as you say, Its laid back and easy to listen too, great job.

George