Hi Joseph @icystorm and @subvibe
Thank you! much appreciated, really. Stay well

Hola @Dorian Urac
Very moving, you made me crying! Love the unexpected arrangement and production!!! Great song and deep feeling.

Hola @mayaclars
It has been a sooo good experience!!! Your talent is growing and growing!!! Very good story, arrangement, sound, it has been really entertaining. Big kisssss for you!

Chiara Kilchling has amazing talent and covers quite a few oldies, but this is an original song she composed and performed with David Mazibrada, titled Humans. It's a little long at 7 minutes, but very enjoyable. Great vocals, lyrics, guitars, and mix!

I previously posted a hit by Quarterflash, titled Harden My Heart. Here is another hit by the group, which reached #14 on the Billboard Hot 100 in 1983. It's titled Take Me to Heart; a quintessential 80s pop-rock sound.

What I really like is the instrumental arrangement and composition and how the  instruments work together. Really great!
Your singing is quite good, but maybe something with the effects and mix of the vocal should be improved. It's a bit Bowie like but maybe too much chorus effect or something

Quote from: Dorian Urac on May 23, 2025, 07:30 AMHi Ironknee. It has been a while since I was on the forum but I remember you making wonderful folk music quiet well.

As always Great Americana folk stuff. In this song, I love the soothing, gentle and warm sound of your guitar. It contrasts beautifully with your pure-from-the-heart country&western voice.

Greetzzz, Dorian

Hey thanks, Dorian,
I'm glad you like it. It's a song meant to be harmless piece of fun.

https://app.box.com/s/jxxgx1gbrkylae3nioqynuqp1wuy2qdn

This is a draft of an original song developed from an instrumental piece that incorporated violin (which was originally the lyrical score of the song), acoustic and bass guitars. I put the following structure here in case anyone wants to practice their vocal harmonies or instrumental accompaniments. This recording was made for collaborative purposes.

Chords: E,B,A,C,D

D           E
There's a place I know
B
Only in dreams
          A
Where I can see you
      C                  D
But you can't see me
   
   
E                   
I see a cabin near
B
Two parting streams
          A
At the edge of a wood
C           D                E
Where a mockingbird sings

E                         
Then the dream fades
B                       
Slowly a-way
             A
But your image remains
     C                 D                                 
Tor-menting my day

                       
E     
And the only thing
B
I want to do
    A
Is dream again
C        D           E
To get closer to you

   
E       
I need you to see me
       B
Just once in my dream
          A
Where one stream is you
            C          D
And the other is me
E
If our eyes could meet
      B
For more than a glance
        A
Then maybe I'll know
C     D           E       
That I have a chance

E
Yes if our eyes could meet
         B
You'd see in my heart
       A
And then you would know
  C                D
I need a new start

           
E         
And maybe you'd break
      B
The spell of my dream
       A
And let me awake
C            D                  C
From this broken heart theme
C                D                 E
The one the mockingbird sings

                 

I really like the "artistic" approach. the production is great. Love the ambiance of it all. I have no idea with how to chang this. I like it!

Yeah.... this keeps growing on me. Has a Pink Floyd vibe that you reflect superbly.
                                        -T