Quote from: Mora Amaro La Loba on May 12, 2025, 06:14 PMThank you so much, really appreciated your so detailed comment @icystorm
I love this song, lyrics here hace a special meaning to me.

@Mora Amaro La Loba - You're quite welcome. Your songs are always authentic, genuine, professional, and enjoyable to listen to! Keep the cool songs and videos coming!

Cheers,
Joseph

First half or so, nice ambiance...I like the production on that part. The part after the vocals...suitable for playing live, I would say. Something you can get into if your audience is grooving with you.

One suggestion--not a very important one. The first line in the second and fourth sections:

commit to it and lay down for a bit

I would change to

commit to it and lie down for a bit

But, like I said, not all that important.

vicki

I finally watched the psycho-thriller Locked with Anthony Hopkins over the past weekend. Overall, I found it to be a mediocre movie. I give it 4 of 10 stars. And after the initial hype months ago over The Age of Disclosure documentary about UFOs, there's been nothing but crickets surrounding it and no news of a release date.

Cheers,
Joseph

Thank you so much, really appreciated your so detailed comment @icystorm
I love this song, lyrics here hace a special meaning to me.

Yes, you are right @IronKnee things have changed but... creators are the same, little hearts that beat in a special way making songs and sharing them like little children show they drawings to their friends or parents...
Of course it's a simile ... Actually creators, most of them, show their work made with pieces of work of others.

Remember, you are an excellent true singer songwriter, never forget it.

It0s a so nice song!!! Love the vocals and melody, very delicate!!! Very nice and feminine song!!!

If you reach out to the various national Meet-Up groups you are certain to get inundated with responses. Most probably won't have semi-polished recordings ready to post but that could change once they're motivated by your site. I imagine there will be good things that come from it.

What you'll need to be ready to accept are works that cut across all genres, age groups and people from rank amateurs to professionals who want to see their names in lights. It might be too much to handle so be ready to roll up your shirt sleeves if you're game.

I've been a singer-songwriter all my adult life and but never took myself seriously. If I could make music that was enough, and still is in the sundown side, but I'm sure others want to make their mark and leave a legacy that reaches beyond their cloistered worlds. I wish you the best of success giving them that chance and all the fun it brings.

@Mora Amaro La Loba – This is an incredible song and video! 🎶 Let's dive into both. I listened a few times to ensure I caught the subtleties of everything.

First, the percussion and bass are coupled nicely in the track, so one can hear and feel both. That creates a great groove to build the song upon. The synths and guitars are layered perfectly. Your vocals and self-backing vocals are awesome as usual. The mix is very clear—it's a great production, sound-wise! 🔊

Regarding the lyrics, they are clever and creative as always. The title is evocative, imaginative, and immediately piques one's curiosity about the song that follows. You've woven time into the story, as you often do, and that's always cool to read/hear! 😎 My favorite lines are:

We are dead and alive
under layers of time
turned into stones over our heads

Your song's words dance on the edge of the macabre (I love it!), and are magnetically enticing and cool. 💯

As for your music video—it's amazing! 🎥 I don't know how you always improve upon "great and awesome," but you do. This is likely your best video yet, with imaginative scenes and interesting images that feel like they're straight out of top episodes of The Twilight Zone and Night Gallery. Your performance throughout the video was very artistic and professional. I especially liked the eerie sun, moon, and sky imagery, and the dancing skeleton was a nice touch. 💀🌕

This is quite possibly my favorite song and video from you. Really great work, Mora! I look forward to hearing and seeing what you create next!

Kind regards,
Joseph