Quote from: Rightly on Apr 17, 2025, 07:35 PMI struggled with this one
Really glad how the solo came together
Any feedback would be appreciated

I hope somebody likes it! 

link:

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/weve-been-everywhere?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing&si=b60e4f90c3fb41c3846ac170045c1deb


Lyrics:

  we've been everywhere


   get up here, get up on your feet
the tide will turn for those who resist defeat
    we've been there, we know it too well
  the weight of the world must carry itself
     we don't care, Laissez-faire
         we've been there

   horizon, the promise of a distant shore
 no longer troubles me, it holds no allure
   body enraptured, still, my heart escapes
     with no fucks to give, I need not relate
       we don't care, Laissez-faire
           we've been there

   there's no going back to the shiny and new 
    so easy on the naked eye, and useful too
            we've been everywhere

 dragging y' dog through the most unrelenting pain
    it's sure to end in tears and in shame
       we don't care, Laissez-faire
            we've been there

 now what we have lost here had tactile value
    all novelty aside for the tested and true
            we've been everywhere
                   we've been everywhere

          _________

         Rightly

Quote from: Rightly on May 02, 2025, 08:05 PMA marvelous read.
I wondering how it'll sit with music
But the lyric was rich enough to hold my attention.
It'll be nice to hear a recording.

Quote from: neil connor on May 02, 2025, 05:04 PMRightly,
Liking the the backing track, it sets things up nicely with its bouncey rhythms.
Cool lyrics and vocals top it off well.
Nice one
Neil